Technoromanticism - Chapter 7
Title: Technoromanticism
Author: Sinnatious
Summary: TezRyo Robot AU.
Rating: Definitely Mature. For the usual culprits.
Author’s Note: I have a feeling my pacing might be terribly off for these last couple of chapters. Will be trying to fix before I post, but not sure how it will go.
( Chapter 7.0 )
I FOUND IT FINE? But I uh, probably would have no real clue on this, since I read these all rather disjointedly. ._.;;
The tiles were refreshingly cool underneath his feet.
Aaah I love this feeling. *_*
instead of being bothered by a bioroid so advanced that it left him feeling obsolete.
AWWWWW. THIS PART IS JUST, SO SAD AND AWESOME AT THE SAME TIME. Besides the obvious, it's like, he knows he's missing something, and he doesn't quite know how to get it. :((
I only ever remember the customers.
askjfhagsadg I COMPLETELY MISSED THIS OMFG. DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD;
And, okay, I was gonna keep doing the quoting thing, etc. Except I did that enough the first time I think?
I just. This part makes me so sad yet soso happy. The domestic scene especially, and Tezuka eating pizza with utensils. KJDHGKSFG MORE PEOPLE NEED TO DO THIS YYYY. sjhgs Gaah. That whole interaction with table manners, and how Ryoma doesn't even listen to him, with the television thing, which oh god. ajkhfgsdg
Then how Tezuka just, opens up to Ryoma. How he's slowly learning what life could be like without being alone all the time, that part. sdjgh ;_; And it's so sad to me because he thinks it's just 'cause Ryoma's a bioroid that he can be that way, not 'cause, y'know, it's Ryoma.
And then it was so very sweet right at the end, especially the last sentence he says. Siiiin, that just. It makes me so *___; at it because jkasgd. The underlying tone I can here him saying that in, that tiny bit wistful and maybe even slightly dejected because either way there's going to be conflict and either way he believes he won't be able to keep Ryoma anyway, because each situation--!! ajskhfgadsg ;____;
And just, you're making me so bipolar stop it. :| :| :|
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Will probably not change much anyway, because I'm loathe to rewrite too much.
Tiles -> I KNOW, RIGHT? *__* I want to go find some nice cool tiles to walk on right now.
You're actually advocating eating pizza with utensils?!!
As for everything else.... ;____;
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IT DOES NOT NEED REWRITING. OR AT LEAST, NOT MUCH IF IT IS BOTHER YOU. :| Because, seriously, the pacing just speeds up and then asdkjfhgkdsdg
MY TILES ARE COLD, THANKFULLY. *_* Yaaay room. :33
WELL, YEAH? I REALLY HATE GETTING GREASY FINGERS. :| Chips too, but I am less fussy with them. :D;;
:-< Oh them. ;;
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