Sins of the Father (9/10) Part 2

Nov 20, 2011 23:24

Title: Sins of the Father (9/10) Part 2
Author: singoutloud25
Pairing/Character: JunSeung, DooSeob, KiWoon, Joon, Mir, Chansung, Taecyeon, Hyuna, Jiyoon, Rain
Rating: R
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance
Summary: The lives of these six young men would now forever be changed. They will become what they once feared and hated. They will become violent, dangerous, aggressive, ( Read more... )

4 minute, kiwoon, dooseob, mblaq, r, beast, junseung, minho, 2pm

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luvysung November 21 2011, 07:56:02 UTC
OH MY GOD... WHAT JUST HAPPENED? THIS IS.. I CAN'T.. HYUNSEUNG..OH MY GODDD... /SOBBING HARD


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singoutloud25 November 21 2011, 07:59:53 UTC
OMG how did you read this so fast?! And I'm sorry for making you wait!!! And thank you for reading!!! And please don't hate me for ending it this way!!! And, well, just wait for the last chapter :)

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luvysung November 21 2011, 08:06:28 UTC
i read it like a mad man ...i have class after this ...and i can bear to not read it first when i see you update... aarrrgghhh wae ..waee... the ending waeeee.... i have to read it properly after this ^__^..kekekeke it was nice and good..

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singoutloud25 November 21 2011, 08:08:26 UTC
I'm very impressed with how fast you read it! Go to class and then read it properly...you'll have to let me know if you still feel the same way^^

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m3nt0s November 21 2011, 08:08:17 UTC
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW FASTTT MY HEART IS BEATING RIGHT NOWW! OMFGGGGGGG.......
i swear, everything in my mind went silent wen i read that doojoon got shot, it was like everything went it slow motion, i just couldnt believe what i was reading (:
skilled hands = paramedics I HOPE! )': please let hyunseung be okay...
no fic has ever gotten me soo close to tears before...YOU ARE AMAZING ♥

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singoutloud25 November 21 2011, 08:11:37 UTC
Thank you sooo much!!!!! I pictured the whole shooting scene in slow motion myself so it's cool that you did too (: Hmmm...you'll have to wait and see in the last chapter :)

THANK YOU AGAIN!!!!!

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luvysung November 21 2011, 08:10:28 UTC
omoooo wth with CUROUS i just wrote up there lol... i mean curious... sorry for spamming.. i'm spazzing because of you.. and hell i have class..yuck

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luvysung November 21 2011, 08:11:59 UTC
and wth i leave a new comment.. *run away ***

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singoutloud25 November 21 2011, 08:13:03 UTC
OMG LOL You're so cute!!! You're making me laugh and smile and I didn't eve notice the curous thing so no worries lol

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lalaine04 November 21 2011, 08:22:32 UTC
I jumped at my seat after seeing your update.
Oh my God. I've never been so emotional like this while reading fics. I really cried at the last scenes. Oh gosh, please let Hyunseung be okay. Please. /sobs

The friendship those six guys have are true. And I love how they trust one another and did not fall on Rain's lies. I really felt relieved when Doojoon's and Junhyung's teams both realized what was really happening. Only true love and true bond would let them see that because most people would instantly hate the other party thinking the other betrayed them.

I salute you for describing the fight scenes so vivid and making them so realistic. I can totally picture them in my mind. And the way you wrote the whole chapter is superbly done bb. I'm always so impressed with how you make your stories. I'm so excited to read the final chapter. Though I'm really sad that it's the END. /cries.

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singoutloud25 November 21 2011, 08:31:46 UTC
Thank you bb for reading and for the lovely comment!!! I'm so glad that you've enjoyed reading this and I'm sad that it's the end too :(

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lunarebina November 21 2011, 11:07:23 UTC
ANDWAEEEEEEEEE!!! Seung is definitely going to be ok! he just fainted, and doojoon's gonna save him (oh please) i was almost afraid to read this cos i know smth will happen! my heart dropped when i thought doojoon was shot, and then dang, i knew it! hyunseung just needed to be shot too! damn. junseung's kiss was so heartbreaking, and junhyung!! wtf, when are you gonna say the three words to seungie you awkward gangsta leader. He can practice Fiction's rap with seung anytime xD
I love the friendship in this fic, eventhough i'm a big fan of junseung, i rly love the interaction among all 6 members, esp hyunseung and yoseob. I love how you portrayed their characteristics too, mainly hyunseung. I totally adore him in this fic xD
This fic is coming to an end... im gonna miss this so much T.T (it hasn't even ended and im alr sobbing)
Am so looking forward to the finale! GAAA~~ Tuesday seems long from now... huhu.

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singoutloud25 November 21 2011, 18:51:13 UTC
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!!!!!!

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