Sins of the Father (4/10)

Oct 17, 2011 23:16

Title: Sins of the Father (4/10)
Author: singoutloud25
Pairing/Character: JunSeung, Yoseob, Dongwoon, Mir, Joon, Hyuna
Rating: R
Summary: The lives of these six young men would now forever be changed. They will become what they once feared and hated. They will become violent, dangerous, aggressive, and one will even become a murderer. They will become feared, hated ( Read more... )

beast, yoseob, junseung, r, drama

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velvet_vietta October 18 2011, 06:46:33 UTC
I..I..this chapter...*sobs*
Hyunseung doesn't deserve all this. All of them don't. Junnie too~~T_____________T

AND UNNIE, I'M SO LOVING THE JUNSEUNG MOMENT IN THIS CHAPPIE...
so sweet. i cant even... <3 <3 <3 <3

cuddling in bed in the morning is really cuteee^^ ASDFGHJKL *fangirl squeal*

ah, and unnie. are you getting better already?? thank you for this beautiful update. MMMWWAAAAHHH!! <3

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singoutloud25 October 18 2011, 07:03:25 UTC
OMG you're fast lol

I'm so HAPPY that you're enjoying this fic!!! It's been a real hard story to write *sobs at remembering how long it has taken*

I'm getting better yeppers :) Thank you for asking and alsdfjal;sjfla;sjdfslaj thank you for commenting!!!

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mankadi October 18 2011, 09:52:51 UTC
Aww this is just way too sad :((
Poor hyunseungie .. He docent deserve this. None of them
He's reallly a good friend.
yoseob must be thankful.
And so junhyung and so the rest of them !
Junhyung... You are not lost . He should help himself while thinking about poor seung !! :(
Seriously Im in love with your fic!!
Update soon <3

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singoutloud25 October 19 2011, 07:54:04 UTC
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I'm happy that you're loving it and I will update very soon :)

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chibi_tenten October 18 2011, 10:15:42 UTC
I just....I have no words....little by little this fic is asking for a long comment from me and it sucks to not have the time to comment it properly ( ... )

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singoutloud25 October 19 2011, 08:02:06 UTC
*SOBS* You got what I was hoping to portray in this story PERFECTLY!!! I cannot state enough how important it is for me that people understand the message I'm trying to portray (did this sentence make sense...lol) and I'm soooo happy that you, and by the looks of it, everyone else are getting it♥

I find it really difficult to write fighting scenes because I don't want them to end up messy and unclear so I'm glad this worked out.

*cries* for some reason I can't find your fics...but whyyyyy?!?!

AHSKLFHASKLDFHLKSDH A FAN FOREVER OMG I LOVE YOU♥♥♥

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chibi_tenten October 19 2011, 09:16:19 UTC
really??! >o< *flails and dance around* You really conveyed your message perfectly since we are all totally getting it! You did a great job and I love all those subtle details that make the story even more interesting ^^

And you can't find them cause I have all my fics on a second LJ ^^U just so they are not really associated to my usual nickname :P it's http://noprincenorape.livejournal.com ^^

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smericas_words October 18 2011, 13:51:56 UTC
I just finished reading all of the chapters that I had missed out on so far and omg I don't even have words to describe the amount of love I have for this fic. Seriously, you were so worried about disappointing, but I promise this is the opposite of disappointment. I won't go on forever in this comment because I read so much and if I pointed out all of my favorite parts my comment would be as long as this chapter lol. But expect longer comments after this chapter, because this fic seriously deserves it.

But can I just say the Junseung in this chapter was so very lovely.

Good job bb! I can't wait for the next chapter! <3

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singoutloud25 October 19 2011, 07:52:57 UTC
*Cries* Thank you so much for saying that it's not a dissapointment, because I honestly have been feeling that way about it a lot.

Thank you for reading and I look forward to your comments...I have a feeling that they're going to make me cry some more.

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chocolate_ai October 18 2011, 14:12:31 UTC
GAHAHAHAHHAA I LOVE HYUNA'S ONE WORD DIALOGUE: MORONS. LOLOLOL!!!

but the rest of the story... makes me so sad T___T Hyunseung was such a hero!! so junhyung, take care of him :,)

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singoutloud25 October 19 2011, 07:50:51 UTC
Lol I really liked writing that scene. I totally saw Hyuna rolling her eyes at them and walking over them while thinking that they were idiots.

Thank you for commenting and for reading♥

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