Reflux

[sinepsdrawkcab]

So Meg and I rented the Aristocrats from QuickFixx and I have to say I fucking love it. It is amazing. Who thought a documentary about a joke would be something more than suck? Anyway, I have refined my list of my five favorite comics (all of which are in the movie by the way). Ok, so I never had a list of five favorite comics. Here we go

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Joe raped me.

[ashesbear]

Dude. Sarah Silverman. FUCKING AMAZING.

Re: Joe raped me.

[sinepsdrawkcab]

Definitely.

Oh and Bob Saget made me cry like a baby. I couldn't breathe. He just doesn't stop!

Re: Joe raped me.

[ashesbear]

Bob wants to put a shoebox over his lap and perform a puppet show for kids.

GENIUS!

[jessica_rabbit_]

how is it that you steal my idea and make it sound so much freakin' better?!? and if you take it off, i'm going to post it back up again, you ungrateful brat. you have a gift. makes me wish i had it. i feel like mine was mindless imagery with a peter pan nostalgic.

yours hit like a ton of bricks. i like the way it flowed. i like the way it cut. some of the lines were disgustingly good. it was like a comfort blanket. especially :
Glowing under bigger words than I knew
I was state-of-the-art filtration
Saying words until they weren't words
Wondering where rhyme ended
And heartbeats began

guh, i think my mind melted into my spine. that kind of chill. i hate you for doing better than me, but i love you so much more for being able to produce something of this magnitude. and don't you dare play humble. i hope you are thinking of something just as good as this as a follow up. or would you like another poem to give you your structure. haha, joking. but seriously, this is striking and witty and beautiful.

[sinepsdrawkcab]

Lol, well, thank you. I still didn't like it. It was too slow for me. I liked some little bits and most of the first liners but otherwise, Idk. I'm just too critical I suppose.

I still liked the original better, that being yours. Much smoother. Besides, mindless (even tho it was mind-ful) imagery is what makes words. Words are only substitutes for something better.

But anyhoozle, thank you very much.

[jessica_rabbit_]

i think this might become a longwinded battle of whose is better and the both of us are going to continue to point at the other. but thank you, i like the ego boost.

let me put it this way, the imagery you used was fresh and very much bold. i like that. mine was a softer version of yours. maybe that is the point. mine is a female version and yours is a male version. hell, we got the ying/yang concept!

but keep it up. i love the way you write. it makes me happy.