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Title: Falling
Characters/Pairing: Eden, Sylar, Chandra Suresh
Rating: R for language, sexual themes
Word Count: 894
Spoilers: Six Months Ago
Summary: Oneshot. Eden does surveillance. Gen-fic, stalking, and just a hint of Syden. Takes place after "Six Months Ago."
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Characters/Pairing: Eden, Sylar, Chandra Suresh
Rating: R for language, sexual themes
Word Count: 894
Spoilers: Six Months Ago
Summary: Oneshot. Eden does surveillance. Gen-fic, stalking, and just a hint of Syden. Takes place after "Six Months Ago."
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I love the bag ripping and the fruit. It was really, really creepy but still with an underline of sweet. Like if was Gabe doing it, it would be fluffy, but with Sylar it’s different…
His eyes are wild and rimmed with dark circles, predatory and completely magnetic, and Eden can't turn away.
GUH,HOT! He totally would be pissed that she was ignoring him before.
Creepy!!! Yet hawt.
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I love the bag ripping and the fruit. It was really, really creepy but still with an underline of sweet. Like if was Gabe doing it, it would be fluffy, but with Sylar it’s different…
Dude, this started out as pure Gabden fluff. But it was really boring so I switched it up and it read SO MUCH better! lol XD
You know what? Sylar is hott and everything, but I think if I were in the Heroes universe I'd be scared out of my mind. He's the bogeyman! lol.
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Dude, this started out as pure Gabden fluff. But it was really boring so I switched it up and it read SO MUCH better! lol XD
It worked so well. If it was Gabden it would be cute, because he's shy and has to resort to his powers. With Sylar it comes off as a bit mean really, like a little kid pulling some girls hair. Or something...
You know what? Sylar is hott and everything, but I think if I were in the Heroes universe I'd be scared out of my mind. He's the bogeyman! lol.
Especially if you see him floating outside your window like Dracula! If Sylar gets a love interest I fear for her . super hot though if does happen. As ZQ said: even serial killers need love!
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Especially if you see him floating outside your window like Dracula! If Sylar gets a love interest I fear for her .
DRACULA!!! ROFL!! XD
LOL I would SO freak out if something like that happened to me. I mean, even if it were ZQ floating in a Sasan!outfit, I'd still freak out. LOL.
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If I can think of anything else, I just might :)
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You know what? Sylar is hott and everything, but I think if I were in the Heroes universe I'd be scared out of my mind.
I agree. When he's safely on the other side of the TV screen, he's unbelievably attractive. But if I were actually in the Heroesverse...OK, I'd still find him unbelievably attractive, but the feeling of offness that everyone gets from him right away would make me react just like Eden.
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I think I wouldn't like this nearly as much if it were just Gabden fluff. As it is now, it's completely believable--it fits so neatly in with why Eden was so adamant that he was dangerous and should be killed as soon as possible, and I like it a lot.
Oh wow, thank you! :D
I do try to keep everything I write as close to canon as possible, because if the characters aren't true, what's the point? It might as well be original fiction, then (and I've totally done that--the last big fic I wrote I changed the names because it was completely OOC).
I agree. When he's safely on the other side of the TV screen, he's unbelievably attractive. But if I were actually in the Heroesverse...OK, I'd still find him unbelievably attractive, but the feeling of offness that everyone gets from him right away would make me react just like Eden.Me too. Even Gabriel, while at first ( ... )
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LOL omg, thank you for reading! So far only hardcore Syden/Gabden girls read my crap, so I'm all excited you read it too--ESPECIALLY since you're a Mylar girl!You're welcome! :0) To me, fic isn't really about shipping--it's about good storytelling. (And OK, sometimes porn.) I tend to only read stuff that involves characters I like, but if it's well-written, in character and gives a new perspective, I want to read it ( ... )
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That's what makes Gabriel/Sylar a tragic figure rather than just a monster, to me: he desperately wants connections with other people, but has absolutely no idea how to go about it normally.
Yeah. Gabe needed someone to hold him and tell him everything would be okay. He's such a tortured figure, which is why I'm drawn to him...
That and I also have a thing for nerds. Not to mention ZQ practically OOZES sexx, omg XD.
I read your Mylar fic, and it was really good! I went and friended your fanfic journal so I don't miss anymore of Teh Awesomeness :)
And I have a very weird relationship with the Mylar. Despite taking part in it, and agreeing that it's a plausible explanation for why the two of them kept postponing killing each other, deep down I...don't actually think either one of them is gay
Yeah. Just like deep down I don't think Sylar has *any* interest in hooking up with anyone, ( ... )
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I could see it happen that way ^^
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I'm glad you liked it! I see you friended me--I friended you back :) My name's Ann, what's yours? :)
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I friended you after reading your Eden/Sylar manifesto (and I wanted to comment but the only thing I could come up with is : WORD, which would have bring nothing to the conversation). Now I just have all kind of ideas concerning those two, thanks to you ! *g*
My nickname is Bambou ;)
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Dude, there needs to be more Syden girls out there--right now there's only four of us who actively ship them, LOL.
Nice to meet you! :)
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