fic: the other side of sunset

[simplytoopretty]

the other side of sunset

It was late summer when she told him it was easy with him. Chloe/Davis. Pg. 2725 words. AUish.

a/n: This is what the muse wanted me to write.

Comments

[vagrantdream]

I haven't read this yet, but trust me, I'm going to, with a cup of hot coffee and a brownie.

#1 -I love your muse. #2 your icon nearly killed me #3 I love your chlavis. see you on my next cooment.

[simplytoopretty]

I'm glad you like my muse. I'm sure my Chlarker friends are going 'Melissa, you were supposed to write Chlark!'

That icon is my sole Chlavis icon. I keep it around just in case I write a bit of Chlavis.

[vagrantdream]

okay so things I looovved.
the phone convo handling. It was a lovely scene, but some things, like you mentioned didn't ring true for me. All for Clark seemed more like something Chloe wanted to make him or herself believe. After all that guilt and ...fantasies.

the Watchtower scene was far, far more in character than the show could do.
I'm pretty sure. We just need time. Him and Me.I don't know how exactly you do it, but whenever I read something of yours. (especially chlavisy :p ) I find myself completely convinced of the plot, what's going on, where the particular characters at in that point in time

[simplytoopretty]

Mostly I wanted to alter slightly scenes to make them fit my interpretation of what could have happened. I'm glad you liked what I did. BTW, the Chlark scene kinda killed my Chlark heart to write, but it felt right for this fic.

I really like my ending. I think because all the action occurs before hand and it's just a simple conclusion with them walking in the rain. I think the simplicity of it appeals a lot to me, hence why I wrote it.

Sure, you can archive it.

[simplytoopretty]

Yes, I wrote Chlavis. This is probably the most romantic Chlavis I've written before.

I'm really glad you liked this story. It was something my muse wanted to write and so I wrote it.

I would love an icon or a banner. I'd probably use an icon more, but I'd love either.

[capriciouswind]

Gorgeous writing as always although I really wanted to smack Clark for his righteous behavior and causing Chloe so much pain. At least Davis is there to comfort her...

[simplytoopretty]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[purple_moon123]

I have no idea why I'm sniffling and about to cry but this is just so beautifully written.

Love the ending!!!!

[simplytoopretty]

I'm glad you liked the ending! Thanks for commenting.