fic: the other side of sunset
the other side of sunset
It was late summer when she told him it was easy with him. Chloe/Davis. Pg. 2725 words. AUish.
a/n: This is what the muse wanted me to write.
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It was late summer when she told him it was easy with him. Chloe/Davis. Pg. 2725 words. AUish.
a/n: This is what the muse wanted me to write.
( & )
the phone convo handling. It was a lovely scene, but some things, like you mentioned didn't ring true for me. All for Clark seemed more like something Chloe wanted to make him or herself believe. After all that guilt and ...fantasies.
the Watchtower scene was far, far more in character than the show could do.
I'm pretty sure. We just need time. Him and Me.
I don't know how exactly you do it, but whenever I read something of yours. (especially chlavisy :p ) I find myself completely convinced of the plot, what's going on, where the particular characters at in that point in time.
resolution for Chlark isn't really resolution, but I get it. it's like what happened in the finale and is true to who Clark is.*pokes him* but except chloe actually *has something*.
I loved the way you end with Wait. Chloe and Davis walking in the rain. I imagine after the whole DD thing it must be something to just slow down and appreciate things. And on the ksite chlavis thread we fangirl that. :p
Also, may I archive? please. It makes me happy.
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I really like my ending. I think because all the action occurs before hand and it's just a simple conclusion with them walking in the rain. I think the simplicity of it appeals a lot to me, hence why I wrote it.
Sure, you can archive it.
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