You Fill Up My Senses, 1/1

[simplyshanni]

Title:  You Fill Up My Senses
Author:  SimplyShanni
Beta:  None. All mistakes are mine and mine alone
Disclaimer:  This is a work of pure fiction. It has been written solely for fun, not for profit. No disrespect is meant to the actual individuals represented here and I make no claims about their sexual orientation in real life.
Pairing:  Orlibean
Genre

Comments

[jackieville]

Congratulations on posting your first fic!!! It is so beautiful! I am feeling warm, fuzzy, and happy!!! Thank you!!! *hugs tight*

[simplyshanni]

Thank you so much much for your kind words! That's exactly the feeling I was going for so I'm glad it worked!

*Hugs you right back!*

Shanni

[simplyshanni]

Oops, I'm all thumbs today! That was one too many "much"es, lol! Okay, that looks really weird when I type that out, but I'm sure you get the idea!

[simplyshanni]

Oh, bless you! I can't tell you what your lovely comment means to me! I put a lot of thought and effort into writing this and when I get feedback as wonderful as yours, it makes it all worth it! I'll be getting to work on Sean's POV after I finish my fic for the Orlibean Valentine Challenge. Your words of encouragement are indeed very helpful, so thank you ever so much!

*Big Grateful Hugs!*

Shanni

[rifleman_s]

I can hardly believe that's a firts piece - it was so well written, and well-defined.

I love the idea of the five senses coming in to play one at a time to make a whole, a whole full of passion and pleasure.

Sean's point of view? Yes please!!!

[simplyshanni]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've dabbled with writing for many years, but I never really finished anything before. I guess I just needed the right inspiration, and Sean and Orli are nothing if not inspirational!!! Since most people do seem interested, I'll be getting to Seanie's POV after I finish my Valentine fic. Thanks again for taking the time to respond!

*Hugs!*

Shanni

[vienna80er]

Beautiful. I like the slow pace of the story! And I'd be very interested for Sean's POV.

[simplyshanni]

Thank you! It was meant to be slow and sleepy and sweet, a gentle awakening. I'm so glad it worked. Sean's POV is on the way, once I finish up my fic for the Orlibean Valetine Challenge.

*Hugs!*

Shanni

[amygirl]

Congrats for getting your toes wet! And what a wonderful way of doing it...well done!

*huggles*

[simplyshanni]

Hi Amy!

Thank you for your sweet comment. I've been a nervous wreck about this, so it's always great to hear from other writers whom I admire.

*Hugs!*

Shanni