Starting Over (1/1)

[simplyprologue]

Title: Starting Over
Rating: MA
Word Count: ~7.4K
Characters and Pairings: Spaceparents, Lauroslin, Papadama, Lee Adama, Kara Thrace.
Disclaimer: If only writing spaceparents smut was financially lucrative. Alas, not mine. Just playing in someone else's sandbox. (I am treating them a bit nicer than Moore does, though. Didn't have sex until ADFMS my

Comments

[raquel2315]

Ok first of all this is downtonstalking from tumblr. Now that's out of the way so let me review this.

I thought I was getting some smutty spaceparents fic and I totally did. Very good, very very good and I should commend you on your excellent writing on that part. Realistic and just awesome. One of my favorite lines: "as Bill proves again that he’s the master of the slow build" - just yes.

But um, also? This was so full of love. So beautiful. I just love the fact that he knows she loves him, even though she won't say it back, because he just knows her and he's okay with that because he loves her. Andplusalso I love that they have a discussion about how he is the only one who gets to see Laura.

Great job. But now I have to go to work with all these emotions. :)

[simplyprologue]

Thanks bb! <33 (Five million years late. I suck at commenting back.)

[michiruwater]

Guh.

This was so frakking hot. Please feel free to write spaceparents smut any time you like. Really. Anytime is fine by me.

[simplyprologue]

Thank you! (Actually working on more--although sadly, shorter--at the moment!)

[larsfarm77]

Holy FRAK. This was wonderful -- you can drop smut (and any other writing) here any day!!

She drops down onto the desk with a solid thump, her body writhing on top of the lacquered wood, and Bill knows that signing reports will never quite be the same.

^ Ngh. What an image!

I also loved this:

She can’t define what this is, won’t make the decision to go down that path, but this helps her. Comforts her--that he doesn’t make her define it. Maybe he has his own definition. And maybe it’s... enough. For him. And them. (For now, a tiny voice whispers from a long-darkened corner of her mind.)

It's so very Laura that she can't and won't define it, but I love how she really does know that this won't always be enough, that she'll have to face it, that it's unfair to him not to.

Smoking hot and loving and them -- couldn't wish for anything more :)

[simplyprologue]

Thank you so much! I've always loved your fic (some of the first I started reading in the fandom, I think) and its so crazy to be hearing feedback from you. :)

[defyingnormalcy]

Oh. My. Gods.

This made me fall in love with AR all over again. You are an incredibly talented writer and you have a really wonderful grasp of the characters and their relationship. This whole fic was so beautifully written, it flowed more like poetry than prose and I was sighing happily as I devoured it. The smut was both sexy as hell yet so emotionally satisfying.

Please, please, please continue to write AR. I get so excited when after all these years we still get precious gems like this to read. :D

[simplyprologue]

omg thank you so much! And I'm always working on one fic or another, so hopefully I'll have more finished soon. :)

[simplyprologue]

THANKS RACHEL YOU WHORE ;)