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simplyprologue

Starting Over (1/1)

Dec 10, 2012 03:53

Title: Starting Over
Rating: MA
Word Count: ~7.4K
Characters and Pairings: Spaceparents, Lauroslin, Papadama, Lee Adama, Kara Thrace.
Disclaimer: If only writing spaceparents smut was financially lucrative. Alas, not mine. Just playing in someone else's sandbox. (I am treating them a bit nicer than Moore does, though. Didn't have sex until ADFMS my ( Read more... )

ship: spaceparents, char: lee adama, char: bill adama, char: laura roslin, char: kara thrace, fic: battlestar galactica

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simplyprologue December 30 2012, 02:21:04 UTC

Thank you! Hopefully I'll have more up soon!

mellow_mel December 10 2012, 22:24:11 UTC

Beautiful lovemaking!!!!
Out of all the excellent writers in this fandom (and OMG some of the best smut writers ever!), There really are only a hand full of writers who can make us actually FEELTheir love! And OMG did I feel this!! LoL
And her blatant hesitation at verbally returning his proclimation and his foreknowledge/ acceptance of her hesitation! You wrote it perfectly! Her (joyful) crying while being intimate was awesome!

So only your first fics are super long and smutty? Lol

simplyprologue December 30 2012, 02:21:55 UTC

Well... not only my first fics. ;)
(Just ask the sansan fandom lol)

Thank you so much bb :)

ravenskyewalker December 11 2012, 02:13:06 UTC

Hnnngh. I posted you some Tumblr encouragement, and I'll do it here, too. This was amazingly hot and sweet and perfectly them (loving each other while not quite being able to state it), and you really must write more.

There were some typos, such as "cupping her the base of head." But the quality of the writing makes up for it. *whew* Yes, indeed. ;-)

simplyprologue December 30 2012, 02:22:37 UTC

Haha thanks--I fixed the typos. (I really need to stop editing drunk and being so hasty to post, tbh.) You'll know the next time I start up on some crazy smut endeavor.

fragrantwoods December 11 2012, 03:15:59 UTC

This was lovely...funny and sweet and so hot and loving. The image of them thoroughly trashing his quarters while enjoying each other was adorable and passionate at he same time. Bill's confidence and Laura's worrying were so spot-on, and them thinking about times on New Caprica was a great counterpoint to what was going on here. So, so good, and the smut was off the charts in the best of ways :-)

simplyprologue December 30 2012, 02:22:50 UTC

Thank you! <333

afrakaday December 11 2012, 04:20:31 UTC

Wow...what a way to jump into writing for a new fandom! You are a really talented writer and I hope you'll continue to write A/R. This was sensual and satisfying. I love that you start it with Kara and Lee around. I also like the point in time that you chose-- and that you acknowledged its arbitrariness (why now?) which really rang true.

Thanks for sharing this lovely smutnugget. It was a delight.

simplyprologue December 30 2012, 02:24:38 UTC

Yeah, it's a strange (yet satisfying) tradition, lol! Thank you! And I'm working on one now (also my WIP that's... A/R in a roundabout way--Down the Sky, which is on ao3 and ff.net but is wildly AU) that should be posted within a few days. Smut again, of course, (my followers on tumblr are the worst influences) but still, who doesn't love smut. ;)