No I haven't caught up yet. I find the beginning of the part1 a bit tedious, but I like the last paragraph before the story "really" begins. Then I found it jumped into action a bit quickly.
I had trouble with the part 2, I thought you made a mistake when you wrote she was reading it (or something like that). I thought 'isn't this supposed to be a "he"?). I had trouble with Anisha being male and/or female. I like the sex as disembodied spirit part.
I didn't find anything that I didn't like on part3 and 4, and I shall be reading the others soon.
Yeah, the prologue was a sort-of after thought. I needed to explain how the universe hangs together in this story and the rather technical prologue was the only way I could think of to do it. You might notice that there are bits of the prologue scattered through the story, but I decided to group them all together at the beginning. There is an epilogue of a similar vein that rounds the story up nicely
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Well okay, I started today and have just finished the firt episode..
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I find the beginning of the part1 a bit tedious, but I like the last paragraph before the story "really" begins.
Then I found it jumped into action a bit quickly.
I had trouble with the part 2, I thought you made a mistake when you wrote she was reading it (or something like that). I thought 'isn't this supposed to be a "he"?). I had trouble with Anisha being male and/or female.
I like the sex as disembodied spirit part.
I didn't find anything that I didn't like on part3 and 4, and I shall be reading the others soon.
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