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deansgirl7107 January 31 2010, 21:23:51 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWW It was pefect,so sweet and hot and sexy.

Love this story since the beggining.
Please update soon.

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silverstrings February 1 2010, 08:40:04 UTC
Thank you SO much for commenting,I'm thrilled you've liked it!! Next and final part (I promise this time) coming up soon....

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silverstrings February 1 2010, 08:42:46 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm thrilled you liked it!! And sure, I have no computer skills but if I can, I'll send it to you -just pm your addy?

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billysgirl5 January 31 2010, 22:04:51 UTC
Another wonderful chapter, Elly!

I loved Jensen getting jealous over that guy flirting with Jared. All this is so new to both guys, they're learning together. And I think that's cute.

I loved that scene at the end, where they're talking in bed. That just seemed to cement their relationship. I hope it continues to go well for them.

PS - LOVE the new layout!

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silverstrings February 1 2010, 08:01:16 UTC
Thank you so much, I did want them to struggle just a little bit with the new-ness of it all, they can't be relationship experts all of a sudden right?? And a little jealousy is just hot ;)

Thank you for your kind comment sweetie, and I LOVE my new layout, I'm so happy I've got such talented friends...

*hugs*

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audeamus22 January 31 2010, 23:27:42 UTC
ANOTHER CHAPTER?!? WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! *TWIRLS*
Although can I just say that I never want this to end kay?! :)

also;
”Yeah, ‘guh’. As in ’too good for words’.”
Damn... Jensen took the words right out of my mouth!!

Awesome work once again hun! can't wait for the next chapter!! :D

LOVE YOU!

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silverstrings February 1 2010, 07:59:09 UTC
I know, I messed up and didn't count the epilogue when counting chapters *hangs head in shame*

Thank you so much sweetie, I'm going over to your journal to read my Jared/Chris now, I've saved it for last! Got my cup of tea, my breakfast, sleeping puppy...it's reading time!!

*loves and hugs*

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audeamus22 February 1 2010, 11:28:55 UTC
haha well yay for you miscounting then! :p

hehe sounds like a good way to be reading fic ;)

*smishes*

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nair_04 February 1 2010, 05:35:24 UTC
Wou!! I'm likeing all the story, but this part... AMAZING!!

Is one of the best sex scene I've read in a long time!

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silverstrings February 1 2010, 07:57:40 UTC
Really?? Wow!! Thank you so much for saying that, writing sex scenes is always a little awkward so I'm glad you approve :)

Thanx for commenting!

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