i absolutely loved your story! you built up your characters and personalities very well and the beautiful imagery you create at this camp is fantastic! Your secondary characters are just as wonderful as well.
I always know that anything you write is going to be fantastic, and this is definitely amazing! It was exactly the sort of thing I wanted to read today. I hope to read more from you soon!
thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed :] there should be one or two stories coming this month if i get myself in gear and actually put them up/finish one... haha
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