Talking to the Moon? Hmm.. I'll try to listen to that. I'm intrigued. :D kill you? OH MY GOSH NO! D; it's angsty, a bit... but there's a little bit of fluff there, I think. :))
i listened to it and I love it^^ It's better if he released his singles like this instead of "Just the way you are" and "lazy song", imo. I kinda don't like those two songs xD
It wasn’t the fact that Minho acts differently when he’s around. It was because Taemin feels like there’s a heart beating inside that metal chest.
But Taemin knows Jinki would disagree. After all, it was logically impossible. - i could seriously quoteback the whole fic but this tugged at my heartstrings the most and just lsdkjgls this couldn't get any more adorable ;_; i know this is probably meant to be a cute and lighthearted fic but the dark undertones (atleast imo) make for a great story. well, 2Min love, in any case, makes for a great story XD love this to bits and if you ever find time or insipiration pls2do a sequel? nevertheless, this is a gorgeous piece and ty for sharing it with us :3♥ *mems*
I'll have to think abt that sequel but I'm not sure how it would go on if I make it longer /fail T_T
I actually didn't mean this as a cute fic. A little but fluffy, yes, and has somewhat shadowy dark undertones. lol. so, yeah, you got that right :) thank you so much for reading ♥
well! that was my main point, really. the tense change, they kind of vary. sometimes they change in the sentence itself, like: It was not a robotic machine that is programmed to do tasks when instructed.
if it was in past tense, it would be "it was not a robotic machine that was programmed to do tasks when instructed", but if it was in present tense it would read "it's not a robotic machine that is programmed to do tasks when instructed", but you kind of blended the two? so yes, that was my main tip. :D
haha. I'm experimenting with tenses. I usually just use past tense but recently I've been using present tenses but I switched back to past here so I guess I kinda got mixed up and stuff. Sorry about that. lol But I edited that sentence you pointed out tho... lazy to check the tenses of the whole fic... sorry -.-"
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kill you? OH MY GOSH NO! D; it's angsty, a bit... but there's a little bit of fluff there, I think. :))
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It's better if he released his singles like this instead of "Just the way you are" and "lazy song", imo. I kinda don't like those two songs xD
and I love, love Grenade :)
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2MIN FOR THE WIN YESAYDASYDG <3333333 hahahah
they're not that different after all amsdhbadj <333 NO BECAUSE THEY BELONG TOGETHER DAMMIT <3333333333 8DDD
oh gia, you are goood~ XD
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-hugs tennie- :3
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As shameless as I am I demand this to be a series.
/gives chocolate cake
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/temptation too ngreat
/slyly gets chocolate cake then runs xDD
I can't do it as a series, even if I wanted to.. idk how the story would go on if I make it longer T-T
thanks for reading tho^^
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Ah~ I kinda understand that...there are times that I want to longer but just can't seem able to do so..
You're welcome~! ;D
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ikr? That why I always get in trouble with chaptered fics. D:
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But Taemin knows Jinki would disagree. After all, it was logically impossible.
- i could seriously quoteback the whole fic but this tugged at my heartstrings the most and just lsdkjgls this couldn't get any more adorable ;_; i know this is probably meant to be a cute and lighthearted fic but the dark undertones (atleast imo) make for a great story. well, 2Min love, in any case, makes for a great story XD love this to bits and if you ever find time or insipiration pls2do a sequel? nevertheless, this is a gorgeous piece and ty for sharing it with us :3♥ *mems*
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I actually didn't mean this as a cute fic. A little but fluffy, yes, and has somewhat shadowy dark undertones. lol. so, yeah, you got that right :)
thank you so much for reading ♥
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idk if you want any concrit, but i did notice some tense changes.
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I do want concrit, please. And, tbh, I never bothered rereading this and editing it as a whole /fail
I ♥ your icon
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well! that was my main point, really. the tense change, they kind of vary. sometimes they change in the sentence itself, like: It was not a robotic machine that is programmed to do tasks when instructed.
if it was in past tense, it would be "it was not a robotic machine that was programmed to do tasks when instructed", but if it was in present tense it would read "it's not a robotic machine that is programmed to do tasks when instructed", but you kind of blended the two? so yes, that was my main tip. :D
overall, i really liked the story though!
and thank you!
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But I edited that sentence you pointed out tho... lazy to check the tenses of the whole fic... sorry -.-"
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