beautiful goodbye

Jun 05, 2011 17:43

title: beautiful goodbye
rating: pg-13
genre: romance, angst
pairing: infinite/rainbow ; l/woori

it's 779 words! which is pretty long for me who can't write long fics ahah(: anyway, I recently came to listen to f(x)'s beautiful goodbye, I know, I know, I'm really late, and I thought the lyrics were really beautiful so I decided to write a one-shot ( Read more... )

pairing: l/woori

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loveholic198 June 6 2011, 03:38:27 UTC
So I see another L/Woori and I instantly go *GAAAASSSPPPPP* and then I see it's angst again, and I sigh.-_- Oh come on, their age thing isn't THAT bad. XD But in this context it's really interesting, a 14 year old boy in love with an 18 year old girl, that is so clever! But it's another breakup, so Huu~ -_- Oh well, more can come, I want to end this cycle soon with my own work, and I'm steering clear of angst!! XD

Screw the jealous little 13 year old fangirls putting Rainbow and Woori down, let them go cry in their little hole.


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silentlybelieve June 6 2011, 03:53:42 UTC
ahaha, that gif is so amusing and so true. & I'm sorry about the angst but I couldn't finish the fluffy ending I was originally going to do, but I had an ending in my head for angst so I decided to finish with that. Hey, maybe I'll think some more & re-write this story with an alternate ending ! Where woori does end up woth myungsoo and it's her that's filling in the empty spot next to myungsoo! And I'll be sure to try writing some more l/woori with fluffy endings.

And I don't think their age thing is too bad either. Four years isn't that bad ahaha(: I wasn't originally planning to write anything because I was just listening to the song & then I saw the lyrics & it said the lyrics you were born four years before me... and I immediately thought of this couple :3 And those stupid fangirls can just keep crying because woori has a greater chance of being with myungsoo then they'll ever be LOL

your long comment made me so happy <3

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thunggyu June 6 2011, 04:06:54 UTC
bb, i didn't think you would be the one writing angst! but i'm sure there's going to be a happy ending for them sooner or later, especially coming from you. :)

i'm going to write a longer comment later since i have an exam in less than two hours and shouldn't be on the computer orz.

He always knew how to calm her down and make her feel like she was the only girl in this world. so, so, so sweet, probably my favorite sentence. :)

all in all, it was beautiful, bb! woori's insecurities were so heartbreaking... it was a nice twist to do an au fic and make them even younger. i don't get why woori gets so much hate from myungsoo's fans.

the end really broke my heart, when she longs for him but then realizes he has moved on. i would have loved for them to really meet again and to see myungsoo's reaction.

it was really bittersweet, cute and sad at the same time. i wish woori could have been a little stronger because having myungsoo and his love was all you needed, woori.

great work, dear! :) (and it really makes me want to write them

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silentlybelieve June 6 2011, 22:56:48 UTC
hehe :3 I'm glad I got the bittersweetness through because that was my whole concept of this story because the title beautiful goodbye is just.. bittersweet. & I agree about the woori hate thing, I just don't get why myungsoo fans decide to hate on her. It's not like they'll ever have a chance with him ahaha(: AND YOU SHOULD WRITE THEM! ♥ this world needs all the rainfinite love it can get!

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yellow_strings June 6 2011, 04:43:54 UTC
SPOT *__* omg.

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yellow_strings June 6 2011, 05:54:00 UTC
omg l/woori again, you wrote them! \O/ it's okay bb, i understand, i also have problems with fluff ^ - ^

the 1st sentence immediately stabs me. She was 18, he was 14. He Did not know what love was. ouch my heart ;__; But i love how you write au for them :)

"I mean you're the best boyfriend a girl could have, you do everything for me and always makes me think of me first,"
yeah. yes, woori, yes. you've approve myungsoo is the best boyfriend ever, i like this kekeke~

That he grabbed her wrists were the resource persons flinging around while she was telling her story, and gently shut her up by putting his lips on hers.
oh hi thar myung-player, icu * o * / fainting

But the space next to him wasn’t empty… It was filled in by a girl that was a little shorter than him and long, wavy hair, just the way he liked Woori as.
oh no, gurrl who you are and what are you doing w/ my otp?! why did you do this to meee? but, but, they're perfect for each other /sobs ( ... )

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Re: silentlybelieve June 6 2011, 12:12:01 UTC
oh my god, long comments make me happy :3

& of course, I added you as friends as well!^^ woot, I really had no big intetion when I wrote the age thing lol it was just there because I felt like the age gap just makes the goodbhe even more beautiful ahaha(:

you practically quoted the whole story XD

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candiiexrawr June 6 2011, 21:27:50 UTC
i like fluffy things but angst is the best ;O..
gshgjldgjf
she should have never let him go ;__;
it'll just kill her on the inside more once she sees him with another girl :|..

always follow what you're heart says even though it might not be perfect (:!
(i have no idea what i meant by that o_o;;)

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silentlybelieve September 23 2011, 02:27:06 UTC
(late reply, i is sorry lol)

i think writing angst is easier than fluff lol
it killed me while writing this too ;w;
(i have no idea what you mean by that either lmao)
thank you for commenting dear ♥

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hightidetaem August 6 2011, 06:54:41 UTC
Hi, I stumbled, apparently; on this fic and I would just like to say I love Rainfinite and this fic. ^^;; Myungsoo being such a nice guy to Woori, and Woori seeing Myungsoo with another girl years later is just ♥.

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silentlybelieve September 23 2011, 02:27:59 UTC
i'm always glad to meet another person that ships rainfinite. i swear, these two groups could become like the new shinra and 9pm! watch everybody fall in love with them later and i can be proud to say, been shipping them since 2010! hehe. and thank you for reading ♥

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