beautiful goodbye

[silentlybelieve]

title: beautiful goodbye
rating: pg-13
genre: romance, angst
pairing: infinite/rainbow ; l/woori

it's 779 words! which is pretty long for me who can't write long fics ahah(: anyway, I recently came to listen to f(x)'s beautiful goodbye, I know, I know, I'm really late, and I thought the lyrics were really beautiful so I decided to write a one-shot

Comments

[yellow_strings]

omg l/woori again, you wrote them! \O/ it's okay bb, i understand, i also have problems with fluff ^ - ^

the 1st sentence immediately stabs me. She was 18, he was 14. He Did not know what love was. ouch my heart ;__; But i love how you write au for them :)

"I mean you're the best boyfriend a girl could have, you do everything for me and always makes me think of me first,"
yeah. yes, woori, yes. you've approve myungsoo is the best boyfriend ever, i like this kekeke~

That he grabbed her wrists were the resource persons flinging around while she was telling her story, and gently shut her up by putting his lips on hers.
oh hi thar myung-player, icu * o * / fainting

But the space next to him wasn’t empty… It was filled in by a girl that was a little shorter than him and long, wavy hair, just the way he liked Woori as.

oh no, gurrl who you are and what are you doing w/ my otp?! why did you do this to meee? but, but, they're perfect for each other /sobs

overall i like this, you wrote angst but i feel a little sweet in it. i also like how you made them broke-up because age gap, that's reality. i've saw fans bashed woori because she's older than myungsoo. fangirls sometimes truly scary tbh :/

sorry for long comment~ and once again, good job! i look forward to your further works! ps: i added you as friends. can we be friends then? :3

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[silentlybelieve]

oh my god, long comments make me happy :3

& of course, I added you as friends as well!^^ woot, I really had no big intetion when I wrote the age thing lol it was just there because I felt like the age gap just makes the goodbhe even more beautiful ahaha(:

you practically quoted the whole story XD