Fic: See My Heart Is Black

[silentdescant]

title: See My Heart Is Black
pairing: Adam/Tommy
rating: R
words: 1760
warning: darkfic, supernatural... something, dubcon
summary: Lights flicker. Tommy changes.
disclaimer: Very untrue. Don't google yourself. Don't pass this along to anyone involved.
a/n: title from Paint It Black. I like the Vanessa Carlton version but of course it's originally

Comments

[rude_bunny]

omg that was amazing! I love stuff like this, I've not read anything like it before. I loved Tommy's slow discovery, little glimpses in the mirror and I love the mystery and omg *flails some more and worships at your feet*. Amazing!

[silentdescant]

I'm glad you liked it, especially since your creep-scale is calibrated differently than mine. :P ♥!!

[wynkat1313]

That was freaking cool! I love how it build... The tension and then the shift at the end, you still don't really know what's going on but there's an acceptance. Creeping and gorgeous.

[silentdescant]

thanks!! it was really interesting to write, since it creeped me out to do it.....

[pussy_in_person]

O.o O.O :O There are not enough emoticons to express my progression of emotions reading this, lol. I just...ack...gahhhj I need closure, an explanation, something? It was almost sinister that Tommy...turned? Adam. Kinda vampiric. But as freaky as this is, I applaud the originality and creativeness!

[silentdescant]

hee. I kind of think of it like... something's possessing Tommy, taking him over, and then infects Adam? not sure. that's the difficulty with making shit up! I hope I don't give you nightmares... ♥

[rboyz]

Oh, I LOVED this! So different. All at once dark and mysterious and mesmerizing and hypnotic and, somehow, incredibly beautiful. I was drawn to the blackness from the beginning, much like Tommy and Adam couldn't get enough of it at the end. Just gorgeous! <333

[silentdescant]

oooh, hypnotic, I like that! thank you so much, bb!

[random_yayness]

CREEPY SHIT! YAYNESS! ♥ you know me and scary stuff, omg, and this is so wonderfully understated. LOVED IT.

[silentdescant]

I'm glad you liked thisss! I was totally thinking of you when I was posting it, lol. I wanted to get your opinion because you are a creepy shit connoisseur but I think you were sleeping, lol. ♥!!!

[random_yayness]

ROFL I AM THE CREEPY SHIT CONNOISSEUR, omg, that is one of the best things anyone's ever called me. XD THANK YOU, BB. ♥

[silentdescant]

what a perfect icon to go with that comment. :DDDD