Demon Dean - Chapter Six

[sil9800]

Title: Demon Dean - Chapter Six
Author: sil9800Characters: Dean, Sam, Castiel, Gabriel, Metatron

Comments

[evelyncarver]

Great to see another chapter so soon :)

I liked Gabriel here, there were some really awesome lines, oh the sarcasm. Also Dean hesitating before touching Cas in case of demon cuffs, aw, that was a great touch. For a moment I was worried that Gabriel was eternally weakening himself, reassuring to know it just takes him longer to 'get back to factory settings'.

Suck it Metatron! Dean's going to get everything out of you.

[sil9800]

Hi evelyn! Thanks so much for the comments! I'm sure I mentioned it at some point, but I've actually written up through chapter 11, so basically I'm just having to edit prior to posting which is why they're getting posted so quickly. Once we get moved into the new place I'll be able to start writing new stuff again, and I can't wait for that! I miss it so much!

Glad you liked the sarcasm, LOL, Gabriel gets a lot of good stuff! :)

[evelyncarver]

I just read through your journal and saw that you've already posted some of the story on ff.net, so now I've got to resist the impulse to go and read it over there. I'd rather wait and read it all with your edits here.

[sil9800]

LOL, with the extra editing, I believe what's being posted here is a better, higher quality version of the story. The story itself is the same, but this version reads better and has a few more details to clarify certain aspects. So if you *can* resist the temptation, I think you will enjoy this version more. If not, I understand that too! LOL :)

[heliokleia]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
*bounces*

[sil9800]

LOL - Love it! Hope you like the next chapter too! :)

[magiad]

I can tell you are using more description in this chapter, I really like that!! I love how DemonDean is protective of Cas and prioritize getting back his grace and how he avert his black eyes so Cas don't get too scared.

Great chap!! :D