Demon Dean - Chapter Two

Jun 17, 2014 13:50

Title: Demon Dean - Chapter Two (WIP)
Author: sil9800Characters: Dean, Sam, Castiel, Crowley ( Read more... )

demon!dean, fanfic, supernatural, season 10

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jennygeee June 23 2014, 09:01:38 UTC
"Sam vowed to himself right then and there, he was going to save his big brother, one way or another! There was nothing he wouldn't do to get his big brother back!" Love this and this is just what I want to see in S10.

Also loved this "Dean looked Cas straight in the eyes and said, "I'll get what you want out of him Cas. I'll find out about your grace and I'll find out how to open the gates of heaven again. Hell, I'll even find out how to get your wings back!" Then the room started to glow as Dean's eyes narrowed and turned pitch black. "But make no mistake about it Cas, once I'm in the same room with that sonofabitch, he will NOT be walking out alive!" this sounded just like Dean and what he would say.

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sil9800 June 23 2014, 14:14:14 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked those parts, and thank you very much for commenting! This whole story came about because I had so many ideas of what I did and did NOT want to see in Season 10. I'm excited for the Demon storyline and totally believe Jensen's got the chops to pull it off! But at the same time, I'm so NOT going to be happy if they take my hero away! Walking the line is one thing, but stepping over it completely? Not so much!

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evelyncarver June 24 2014, 02:38:48 UTC
I loved Sam using Bobby's advice to get a handle on the situation. And how Dean's demon eyes came out as he got angry about Metatron, I sort of hope that he gets to torture him (I mean, Metatron did kill him, it seems only fair).

"Guys? GUYS! You're just gonna leave me here? Oh Come ON! I told you everything I know! We're in this together now guys!"
This actually made me laugh, Crowley would hate to be locked up alone in there again.

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sil9800 June 24 2014, 15:40:21 UTC
Yeah, obviously Sam was pretty overwhelmed with everything that was going on at that point. It kinda reminded me of when Dean was overwhelmed when Jo was dying in 5x10 "Abandon All Hope" and Bobby kept asking Dean, "What's next?" So that's where that came from.

Regarding Crowley: I'm trying to keep things as close to the what's actually happening on the show as possible. So Crowley is still feeling humanized, and still idolizing the boys somewhat, so yeah, he doesn't want to be locked up in that dungeon again, and he does want to be part of whatever else is going on.

Really glad you're enjoying the story! :)

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magiad January 13 2015, 06:18:57 UTC
"when he told his brother he wouldn't try to save him if he were dying" I was so mad at Sam when he said that in the series, I'm so glad you mentioned it here and that Sam is so set in saving Dean plus recognizing everything his big brother has done for him.
Dean's words about his price were really good, I love how he spoke to Cas, I could very well picture his passion and anger.

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