Alone..... Part VI..... the Epilogue

[sienata]

A/N: Here's the last little bit of this story, my semi-realistic RPS story of what could've been, but most likely only happened in my fantasies. Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback you've given me along the way. I think - of all the things I've written - this has touched me the most.

FYI: For those of you lucky enough not to know, DNR means

Comments

[ramona4jake]

You're right, the vid is a very sad, breathtaking version of the movie... I like your story, I didn't believe this at the beginning, but it actually has a happy end - thank you ! I enjoyed so much their dialogue, it made Jake's passing so much easier and not frightening, and after so much time, Heath finally and for forever got his prize - LOVE !
Thank you so much, Jane, it's a wonderful story !

[sienata]

Thanks... Im glad you enjoyed it. It's really special to me. :)

[torry28]

It was sad but the end was the most rewarding for Heath, Jake and for us. A beautiful story Jane, thank you for writing it.
A Love That Will Never Grow Old.
Hugs
Torry

[sienata]

i'm glad you enjoyed it Torry. Hugs to you. S.

[anony_mouse19]

**He looked down to see a hand he remembered from so long ago, had thought never to see again.....
“Oh my God..........”** oh God this made my heart leap.

the first chapters were so devastating but it got better with each chapter.
and i agree the way he left is a pretty good way to go,he just fell asleep.people die from terrible things(just think about the people in China).um i hope i could express what i'm thinking i don't want to be misunderstood in this case.well since i'm gonna die too someday i'd like to go that way too.

thank you.it was a really touching story(though i wish you made Jake marry someone else, someone we don't know.not her.bah.omg, i'd have to quit internetz if that happened *shudders* )

*hugs*
-Kay

[sienata]

Hey... i know what you mean... there are so many awful ways to die... my aunt just died a few months ago from brain cancer, it was similar to this..... sad but peaceful at least....

i think i'm writing about him marrying her to get myself prepared. i want him to be happy and all that blah blah, but as for me personally, it's not a relationship that makes me excited at all. i know that's irrelevant to the rest of the world, but it is important to me.... as a fan.... we'll see how it all goes down... i saw a headline on the internet the other day about off and on couple calling it quits. me and the bb both clicked on it, hoping it would be them, but no. oh well, he's still fun for stories...

thanks for reading. hugs. s.

[anony_mouse19]

oh sorry about your aunt.brain cancer,that's hard.

i feel the same.i'm very much resigned but it still sort of hurts me to see pics.and then there's the part of me that still clings to the fact that he never confirmed they're together but actually denied it.oh well.
another reason that i miss Heath.cause i actually liked my fannish state with Heath.i absolutely did not care about those things with him.it was a healthy fan-star relationship. *sigh*

[sienata]

yeah. i hate seeing the pix, and i feel bad about that in a way, because i really do want him to be happy, and if she makes him happy, that's great... it's just kinda ick to me, but it's not my life, so i'm trying to keep it in perspective...

and yeah, again, i really liked the way i felt about heath, not stupid... i'm stupid about him now, but his girls never bothered me, i guess because he had M. from the get-go.... i never had any hopes that maybe he wasn't into girls... the way J. acted for a while, it really made me hope... oh well.

what you said..... *sigh*

[shieldmaid1]

Thanks for continuing this story and then bringing it to such a peaceful end. It made me feel a lot better about many things here on Earth, to read your interpretation of them. I like to think that bliss like this could await them after all. :)

[sienata]

Yeah, sometimes thinking about hope for after is the only thing that makes now bearable for me. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hugs. S!

[cazzyj6740]

Oh Jane....goddamn girl, your writing brings out so many emotions in me.

Reading your note about DNR - unfortunately I know intimately what that means - so I prepared myself. I wasn't expecting this to be so utterly beautiful and heartwrenching all at once, though it's you writing it so I wasn't that surprised.

It made me ache for Heath, ache for what was and what could have/should have been. Those lyrics are phenomenal and so fitting - what a wise choice for the filmmaker to put that in the movie and for you to use in this gorgeous story.

So many emotions, and so little use of my brain at the moment to put into words, so I'll just thank you from the bottom of my heart for this

Hugs, Carolynn

[sienata]

thank you so much... i'm a little iffy about this piece... lots of folks wanted the end, wanted to see them back together, and i kept thinking about it, so i finally decided to write it. i hope this measures up to the rest of the story and isn't a disappointment to anyone... i guess that's my fear... i'm so insecure... blech!

thanks for your nice comment. it made me feel lots better. hugs. s.