Boys In Love - Epilogue - Part 3

Jan 28, 2008 12:08


Jake had been slow and gentle with him that night, loving every inch of him, doing everything he could to make sure Heath didn’t have a thought in his head that didn’t revolve around him and the pleasure he was giving him. Jake had learned a thing or two about patience during the years they’d been together and it had paid off that night...... When ( Read more... )

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torry28 January 28 2008, 20:51:39 UTC
Thank you Jane.
It is hard not to think if only.
But I never associated your fictional characters to the real people. So it was ok to cry over the difficult life they had to lead and happy they found that loving each other was more important than everything else. Maybe someday you could take us for a visit to see how their life together has progressed.
Hugs
Torry

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anneli9 January 28 2008, 20:57:17 UTC
I am so glad that you continue to write and to post about the boys that we all love so much. I haven`t read this one yet, but I want you to know that I will read it as soon as I get some time to do it. And knowing you to be "a happy ending" kind of girl, I think I can handle reading this.

"Boys In Love" was one of the first stories I ever read in this fandom, and you made me fall totally in love with Jake and Heath. I have been a big fan of your writing ever since, I read and I love everything you come up with.

I want to thank you for being here now, and thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent through all your beautiful stories. Looking forward to read this, and a lot more of your work!!
Take care,
Ann

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coffee83 January 28 2008, 20:58:05 UTC
This was so so lovely to read, oh so lovely.
I'm in my happy place.
And of course, if they could have, they would have made a baby.
I'm guessing in this Universe, their baby is Matilda?

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sienata January 29 2008, 01:57:25 UTC
i love matilda... she's so cute and sweet and messy, not like suri and all of those perfect babies... of course the baby had nothing to do with anything, but i still love matilda, so yes, if i were to write more, their first baby would be with matilda...maybe becuz of a chance hook up with michelle who wants a baby too but is so busy, no time for romance... which is, unfortunately, what they say basically caused their bust up in the first place... too busy schedules...... i think there was a lot more to it than that, but i'm willing to accept their public story now. it doesn't matter.

hugs. s.

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coffee83 January 29 2008, 16:24:02 UTC
Matilda is all perfect because she's a picture perfect of Heath. You know how when there are babies they always say "oh she/he looks just like the mom/dad", I never see it, to me they never looked like neither but Matilda is exactly EXACTLY like Heath.

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annabirmingham January 28 2008, 21:27:55 UTC
Thank you for this - it did touch on some difficult bits but overall was lovely and would have been so great if it had been like this in real life.

I even had a little snicker at the line;
As long as it wasn’t Scientology, if it was helping Heath, then Jake was all for it. :)

Looking forward to reading more of BFF and AKL and ALSE....!

Anna x

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my_lil_darlin January 28 2008, 21:34:50 UTC
***his clothes were high-style homeless, not bottom of the dumpster variety*** OMFG, thanks for the laugh-- a real honest to God laugh, one of only a few this week. That's a great description. *s*

***then fell back flat on the bed and was rewarded immediately with one hot, hard, man-hungry Australian sinking down on top of him*** That gave me a big lump in my throat. That hot hard Australian... oh, never mind. God.

***You’re the best thing that’s ever happened to me, you know. You’ve given me things I don’t think anybody else ever could... strength and stability and security... *** I wonder if Michelle tried to give those things to the real Heath. I think I like *your* Heath better than I would have the real one, hate to say it. This one in your story is fantasmagorical, lucky Jake!

***taking him - as Jake had known he would - on a long, sweet ride to Heaven.....*** Just up the stairway to heaven, like in my icon.

Thank you, Jane, honey. You made my day. Seriously. *hugs you*

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