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Boys In Love - Epilogue - Part 3

Jan 28, 2008 12:08

Jake had been slow and gentle with him that night, loving every inch of him, doing everything he could to make sure Heath didn’t have a thought in his head that didn’t revolve around him and the pleasure he was giving him. Jake had learned a thing or two about patience during the years they’d been together and it had paid off that night...... When ( Read more... )

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Boys In Love - beautiful..... ennis4me January 28 2008, 19:29:10 UTC

I think this is beautiful, and oh, how I wish it really could have been. Every word is perfect, and if I could quote a fabulous part, I think I'd have to quote the entire story.

I hope you continue this - oh please!! I really want to see these boys continuing down Heaven here on earth.

Thank you so much.....Adrianne

Re: Boys In Love - beautiful..... sienata January 28 2008, 19:53:37 UTC

Thank you so much... that's a really nice compliment for me. I've been worried about this since i decided to write it... not only will it hit on sensitive nerves, but it's also not 'where i'm at' in my head anymore. Every story has a rhythm that i get into as i'm writing, and it's hard to pick up after a year and a half away. I really wanted to be with them again, though, and I thank you so much for reading it and giving me such a nice bit of feedback. It all helps me feel better, and I hope this helped you a bit too. Hugs.. S...

Re: Boys In Love - beautiful..... ennis4me January 29 2008, 01:06:12 UTC

Oh, maybe I'm not understanding, then....

this isn't a new story....so that means there's more??? On your journal???

I'll have to check it out.

And yes, it helps, believe me. I see his face and I feel like I lost something so tender and real, even though I didn't know him personally. I hope he's at peace, and through stories such as this, maybe we can find a bit, too.

And boy, do I really wish he had an angel on earth sticking by his side....he really needed one I think.

HUGS back....Adrianne

Re: Boys In Love - beautiful..... sienata January 29 2008, 03:04:36 UTC

in case it was confusing, here is the link that will get you to the first few chapters of Boys In Love. Thanks for reading... sorry i wasn't more clear about what was going on. Hugs... S!.

http://sienata.livejournal.com/?skip=20&tag=boys+in+love

fl1789 January 28 2008, 19:46:58 UTC

this was beautiful.
I found it hard to read at the beginning
but I let my mind fly with the story and it felt a little like the early times when reading this stories was pure joy and there was nothing in real life to feel angst about.
please,write much as you can, your stories are very needed right now.

saludos, fl.

sienata January 28 2008, 19:55:00 UTC

Yes, i knew this would be harder for some folks to read, because i did try to go to some bad places with Heath... nothing like what the real H. went through in real life, but My Heath might've gone there too but for a certain someone that was able to make a difference.

Thanks for reading. I'll be writing on BFF again tomorrow. Hugs. S.

brackley22 January 28 2008, 20:01:14 UTC

I enjoyed this very much. It was hard to read through some parts, and if I hadn't had the assurance that you are a "happy ending girl" you would have scared the shit out of me when Jake woke up without Heath. There are so many parts I loved about this. The ending was wonderful, filling me with that warm happy feeling I get when reading your stories. (On a non angsty part, that is :) But I also really appreciated the humor in parts like "fucking actors" and the soap opera bit. As always, I can't wait to read the next thing you write.
Brackley

sienata January 28 2008, 20:06:29 UTC

Thanks for reading. I really wanted to at least touch on what happened in RL, so yeah, it did get a little bit dark and ick, but i'm glad you hung in for the happy ending. If that every changes about me, i'll be sure and let everyone know. Hugs. S.

tmn1966 January 28 2008, 20:11:32 UTC

You did an excellent job, dear. I was a little apprehensive (just a little mind you) when you stated that it would be a bit dark, but then it had to be. The end was perfect, just like I remembered them from when I first read BIL. You stayed true to your characters and that's what I love about it.

Thank you, dear one, for giving this to us. It is wonderful.

Teri

dwarfishdiva January 28 2008, 20:21:12 UTC

If only it could really have turned out that way.

Thanks for writing it.