Hey, never knew rocket scientists can be so hot. You know I like your writing style and this story is another good one. I really liked the introduction of Eli but when he first told about Jonas I had the feeling Jonas only wanted to mess around with him. Glad I was wrong. Lovely christmas story- thanks Paula
It took me a while to get to commenting because I haven't been using my Friends Page for a while, and I missed this story and the whole drama about your submission. But it sounds like everything turned out just as I would have expected anyway. :)
I enjoyed this bit of holiday fluff. Even your fluff has lovely details like Clyde with his goofy eye. But as soon as I saw the name Jonas, you know my first thought was, is it that Jonas? Since this whole tale was from Eli's point of view, my question couldn't be answered. There's nothing here that tells me Jonas Cooper isn't Jonas Tatum. If you don't want to answer, I'll accept that, but I really did hope you'd continue his story, even if you had to find a way around the worst of it for the time being. And if you haven't yet, but still hope to do it in the future, I'm good with that, too.
No, it's not that jonas. that jonas has his own eli, but they meet up much earlier in life.
i know. i'm sorry.
did you see what i'm trying to drag you into? if you aren't looking at your friends page, maybe that means you aren't so interested in reading anymore. if not, just let me know and i'll add someone else instead. i can still leave you on if you want, but i do want to have some folks who are actively reading and commenting. :)
you do that really well, but if your interests are changing, i understand.
Whuhuh? Sorry if I gave you the impression I wasn't interested...that's not the case. The only reason I haven't been using my Friends Page for a while is that I had a great deal of shit going on and was just getting quick fixes here and there for a while, not doing a very thorough job commenting, either. But once I saw the stuff I'd been missing, I put it back in my routine.
You can have as many Jonas & Eli-s as you want. Hmmm, J&E in multiple universes...what a strange concept.... ;)
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Thank you for friending me so quickly.
I liked a lot the story: it's funny and sweet. In fact, if all the other stories in the book are so good I should really buy it!
Best Wishes!
Antonella
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You know I like your writing style and this story is another good one. I really liked the introduction of Eli but when he first told about Jonas I had the feeling Jonas only wanted to mess around with him. Glad I was wrong.
Lovely christmas story- thanks
Paula
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I really liked it, it was fun and sweet and hot - I wouldn't mind reading about these guys again.
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I enjoyed this bit of holiday fluff. Even your fluff has lovely details like Clyde with his goofy eye. But as soon as I saw the name Jonas, you know my first thought was, is it that Jonas? Since this whole tale was from Eli's point of view, my question couldn't be answered. There's nothing here that tells me Jonas Cooper isn't Jonas Tatum. If you don't want to answer, I'll accept that, but I really did hope you'd continue his story, even if you had to find a way around the worst of it for the time being. And if you haven't yet, but still hope to do it in the future, I'm good with that, too.
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i know. i'm sorry.
did you see what i'm trying to drag you into? if you aren't looking at your friends page, maybe that means you aren't so interested in reading anymore. if not, just let me know and i'll add someone else instead. i can still leave you on if you want, but i do want to have some folks who are actively reading and commenting. :)
you do that really well, but if your interests are changing, i understand.
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You can have as many Jonas & Eli-s as you want. Hmmm, J&E in multiple universes...what a strange concept.... ;)
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