Eli's Christmas Wish, Pt 2

[sienata]

Eli's Christmas Wish continues....

Comments

I loved it

[sapphobrazil]

Hum.. That was yummi!!

Great Job
Love

Ana

Re: I loved it

[sienata]

thanks so much. :)

[freetraveller15]

Thank you for friending me, so I could read this original fic.
I really liked the premise and your assured style.
You seem very confident in a doing 1st-person narration.
I have to confess, as much as I love reading about Jack and Ennis, in this case, I didn't picture them while reading. And that's to your credit. I thought you did a good job in creating original characters who can stand on their feet, so to speak.
Is this story going to be posted on a online magazine?
I must have missed the post with the details...
Thanks for sharing,
Paola

[acquaalta]

“Is he allergic to cats?”

“I hope not.”

***

“Do I need to bring anything?”

I had condoms and lube. I couldn’t imagine what else we would need. “No, everything’s covered.”

That is a wonderful (Christmas) story.
As usual I wished it would continue but it works perfectly for me in the short version as well.
I loved the thoughts in between, the light tone you put into it.
Just what a Christmas story needs: sweetness, laughter, surprises, and presents.
Great one!!!

Thank you again for letting me read it,
best wishes, B.

[happygirl1]

Thanks so much for friending me. I just think you are a great storyteller. The way you write...the characters are just so real!!! I really enjoy your bbm stories very much...hope you get back to all of them soon. I miss them! BFF,ALSE etc, but until then..this was just great. More please!!! Gwen

[anony_mouse19]

hey that was very fun and sweet.the descriptions helped too since i'd think about J&H anyway.dream pair.

i loved the present and that Eli cheated to get it.

thanks for sharing.