Comments | shweta_narayan: Mentor's Lament (funded!)

shweta_narayan

Mentor's Lament (funded!)

Jul 15, 2010 17:05

Sorry the poem's late -- I got caught up in reading Family Man diss research, remembered on the way home, then --- was offline because of a thunderstorm.
Yes. There is a thunderstorm here. In SoCal. It's hot and humid and feels like some other climate zone entirely.

Anyway! Another poem that probably needs no explanation. It's a sonnet, so, ( Read more... )

mentor's lament, poem, sonnet, crowdfunding, clarion

Comments 7

sartorias July 16 2010, 04:14:32 UTC

I thought I saw clouds down south!

shweta_narayan July 16 2010, 04:49:53 UTC

PINK LIGHTNING!

dichroic July 16 2010, 10:19:32 UTC

I like this one!

shweta_narayan July 21 2010, 16:41:16 UTC

whups! Belatedly, thank you :)
I missed lj notification here somehow.

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shweta_narayan July 21 2010, 16:42:23 UTC

It probably has to do with too many summers as a kid when the only reading around after I'd reread the comics were a) back issues of Reader's Digest and b) complete works of Shakespeare :D

Sorry for the late response; I missed lj notification here somehow.

rose_lemberg July 19 2010, 14:26:50 UTC

Sonnets are really not my thing, but I love this one because it has the perfect ending. People often don't realize how important endings are in poetry. And you, my dear, are very good with poetry endings :)

shweta_narayan July 21 2010, 16:43:03 UTC

Thank you, dear :)
I definitely work on them the hardest.

Sorry for the late response -- I missed lj notification here somehow.