Comments | shuu_cream: [100 kinks] 35. 1:58am/ 89. Marks

shuu_cream

[100 kinks] 35. 1:58am/ 89. Marks

Jul 08, 2009 23:49

Title: 35. 1:58am/ 89. Marks
Pairing: Akame [uke!Jin 8D]
Rating: NC-17
Genre: fluffy sleepy smut
Warnings: uh. smut.
Disclaimer: I own nothing and nobody D8
This is my first ever smut. Please be nice TwT;

( 'If it hurts, tell me and..' Kazuya started, quickly silenced by the look in Jin's sleep hazed eyes. 'Don't you dare stop', Jin was thinking, and Kazuya knew it. )

r: nc-17, p: akame, l: oneshot, 100 kinks

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bellemainec July 9 2009, 21:20:37 UTC

oh wow, that was...... great. Hot and well written and really really hot (did I mention it was hot), but what made it great for me was the emotional connection between them. the ease of their relationship, the warmth, the knowledge of each other was sweet and lovely, and it was great. well done!

shuu_cream July 9 2009, 21:39:47 UTC

I wanted them to seem like everything was done with years experience, so I'm really really glad their connection is obvious ^^; and thank you for saying it's hot~ X3; I wasn't too sure about that when I was writing, I just wanted the love ♥
Thank you so much ^^ it means alot to me ♥

bellemainec July 9 2009, 22:33:13 UTC

The years of experience thing definitely came through :) It was lovely :)

And for me, the hot came from the caring, and gave it the focus and engaging aspect :) It was good :)

sweetpaopuwind July 11 2009, 06:34:31 UTC

I'm having trouble forming coherent thoughts at the moment. I'm just so in love with how you've captured the dynamic between Kame and Jin. I agree with so much of what you wrote, characterization-wise. I too believe it's completely realistic for Jin to be a submissive partner--he's definitely the M to Kame's S. xD I also love how you applied his stubborn, 'my own pace' attitude to the affection he shows in caring for Kame and tending to his needs. I thought it was a wonderful intermingling of different aspects of his personality, and I thought it was very believable.

Gah...this post was originally going to be so much longer. I have a lot more thoughts spinning around in my head about this and other Akame-related subjects, but I'm way too tired at the moment to put them in any kind of coherent order. >< Perhaps tomorrow?

In any case, fantastic work on this, and I'm really looking forward to reading more in the future. =)

shuu_cream July 12 2009, 00:38:43 UTC

Thank you ever so much~ ♥ >///< your comment made my day~ their relationship really means alot to me, and I've spent several years now building up an opinion of it strong enough to hopefully make it seem natural. I'm so glad you agree with it ^^; Jin hardly ever gets to be the submissive one~ andand.. you're the only peson to have ever said that that I haven't forced to >> Kame is so S, and Jin takes that very happily~
Well.. even in that situation, Jin is kind of difficult to go along with being caring~ XD he loves Kame and wants him to feel good, but they're close enough for him to be a brat still without causing any offence ^^;

That was long as it was o_o I was suprised~ if there's anymore I'd be interested to hear it though ^^;
Really, thank you so so much ♥ I really appreciate it ^^

sweetpaopuwind July 12 2009, 05:47:54 UTC

sweetpaopuwind July 12 2009, 20:05:10 UTC

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itsumono_you_ni September 30 2009, 16:44:23 UTC

;FCLMDSAKCLNDSICIEpFHSofcewoijfewUKE!JIN~ \(^_^)/ Such fluffy, lovely, HOT smuuuuuut ♥

You're so versatile, I wouldn't have guessed this fic is of the same author as the guro fic *is jealous xD*

sou_kiri September 30 2009, 22:49:53 UTC

>///< I'm glad you like it~ ♥

thank you? 8D I'm always pretty jealous of people that can hold down a style, but if being versatile is a good thing then I'll take it as a compliment X3; I wrote the guro fic when I was in a really bad mood, so.. maybe that effected it >>

bellemelody August 26 2012, 22:56:00 UTC

I'm so in love with this fic! I read russian translation and I adore the feeling of this amazing and so sleepy-hot fic!!!!
amazingly written and I love your characterization a lot <3

thank you very much for sahring <3

shuu_cream August 26 2012, 23:30:58 UTC

Oh! Could you link me to the Russian translation please? I'd like to link it to this post but the girl translating it didn't tell me where it was.
And thank you, I'm glad you like the fic and the characterization ♥

bellemelody August 27 2012, 00:03:56 UTC

it's the anonymos post at the fandom battle. when the battle will end I think she will post it at her journal under her name. this is the link of the anon post- http://fk-2012.diary.ru/p180004051.htm

shuu_cream August 27 2012, 00:12:33 UTC

Ah, I see >< Thank you anyway. If you see it being linked anywhere in the future could you please let me know?

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