[100 kinks] 35. 1:58am/ 89. Marks

Jul 08, 2009 23:49

Title: 35. 1:58am/ 89. Marks
Pairing: Akame [uke!Jin 8D]
Rating: NC-17
Genre: fluffy sleepy smut
Warnings: uh. smut.
Disclaimer: I own nothing and nobody D8
This is my first ever smut. Please be nice TwT;

'If it hurts, tell me and..' Kazuya started, quickly silenced by the look in Jin's sleep hazed eyes. 'Don't you dare stop', Jin was thinking, and Kazuya knew it. )

r: nc-17, p: akame, l: oneshot, 100 kinks

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sweetpaopuwind July 11 2009, 06:34:31 UTC
I'm having trouble forming coherent thoughts at the moment. I'm just so in love with how you've captured the dynamic between Kame and Jin. I agree with so much of what you wrote, characterization-wise. I too believe it's completely realistic for Jin to be a submissive partner--he's definitely the M to Kame's S. xD I also love how you applied his stubborn, 'my own pace' attitude to the affection he shows in caring for Kame and tending to his needs. I thought it was a wonderful intermingling of different aspects of his personality, and I thought it was very believable.

Gah...this post was originally going to be so much longer. I have a lot more thoughts spinning around in my head about this and other Akame-related subjects, but I'm way too tired at the moment to put them in any kind of coherent order. >< Perhaps tomorrow?

In any case, fantastic work on this, and I'm really looking forward to reading more in the future. =)

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shuu_cream July 12 2009, 00:38:43 UTC
Thank you ever so much~ ♥ >///< your comment made my day~ their relationship really means alot to me, and I've spent several years now building up an opinion of it strong enough to hopefully make it seem natural. I'm so glad you agree with it ^^; Jin hardly ever gets to be the submissive one~ andand.. you're the only peson to have ever said that that I haven't forced to >> Kame is so S, and Jin takes that very happily~
Well.. even in that situation, Jin is kind of difficult to go along with being caring~ XD he loves Kame and wants him to feel good, but they're close enough for him to be a brat still without causing any offence ^^;

That was long as it was o_o I was suprised~ if there's anymore I'd be interested to hear it though ^^;
Really, thank you so so much ♥ I really appreciate it ^^

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sweetpaopuwind July 12 2009, 05:47:54 UTC
sweetpaopuwind July 12 2009, 20:05:10 UTC
sweetpaopuwind July 13 2009, 01:42:12 UTC
shuu_cream July 13 2009, 09:43:08 UTC
woah o_o; I'm sorry for the monster comment I sent in reply to this~~ I didn't realise how long it had gotten >__<; feel free to skip over parts, I really hadn't intended to babble on so much ^^;

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