This bit is troubling me. It took a while to write it. But I could be over-analyzing it.

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How does this scene play out? Does it seem like Julian? I have not made up my mind. I can't decide if Julian is just being too mean. But it might be more that I know how mean it is...and I think that a reader would understand as well...but Julian is not really aware of how horrible it is.

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Trying something new. *sighs* That is a big deal for me.

Chapter in Progress. Not sure about what is entirely going on here. It feels necessary...but I worry that Garak may be slightly off. I don't even know if I have enough here to tell. *sighs*

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