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Camp Mendinghell Part 2/?

Oct 23, 2008 22:01

Camp Mendinghell (temporary name for AU fic) Part 2/?

Rated: T
Disclaimer: I don't own the O.C. characters or actors. This is a work of fiction and not meant to infringe on any copyrights.
Summary: This is an AU in which Ryan meets the Newport kids at a tough love wilderness camp.

AN: Again there are probably numerous errors because I wrote this ( Read more... )

camp, mendinghell, a.j.

Comments 13

katwoman76 October 24 2008, 06:01:15 UTC

And now you add Oliver to make the trip even worse for them?
Poor guys.

And since even at a ToughLove-Camp AJ probably can't get too physical with the rich kids to avoid suiing, I guess he will use Ryan as his outlet a lot. Just like with that first attack on that day.

shouldsleep October 25 2008, 18:25:09 UTC

Two villains is better than one! Thanks for reading.

kazfloyd October 24 2008, 10:42:36 UTC

OMG, now you add Oliver to the mix too. LOL. This is getting interesting.

shouldsleep October 25 2008, 18:25:33 UTC

jassylou October 24 2008, 20:12:25 UTC

OMG! What a dilemma Ryans in now,as if "f..k'n AJ with the spade handle isn't enough.

He's now got "Mad Man" of the woods Trask to survive against.
Oliver will definitely in true to form fashion start stalking one of the girls. I think Ryan will have laid Taylor *nods*)and then "The Trask" will start his maniacal ways.

You got me!! I definitely wasn't expecting Oliver although him and AJ are made for one another.*nudge,slash.man rape*

Great,enjoyable writing and no mistakes that I could see.

It's original and breaks away from the "norm".
More soon please...Hugs.

PS: I think the temp title is great.

shouldsleep October 25 2008, 18:26:07 UTC

Thanks!

60schic October 25 2008, 06:35:37 UTC

Well s**t---that can't be good. As if Ryan's life in this fic isn't difficult enough.

shouldsleep October 25 2008, 18:27:04 UTC

True, and now the oatmeal has to go seven ways.

beachtree October 26 2008, 00:15:50 UTC

Oliver Twisted? Didn't he get his fill of peanuts- and Ryan's finger tip, while in Berkeley? Oh, yeah, that's a parallel universe in the future! ; ) O.T. really is like a bad rash or some for of pestilence. He just keeps popping up and spreading- with impeccable timing. As if poor Ryan didn't have enough to contend with as A.J.'s human punching bag and choice for regular and random target practice ( ... )

shouldsleep October 28 2008, 20:51:23 UTC

Thank you for continuing to follow the story. I'm glad the characters seem familiar, if not completely in character.

beachtree October 28 2008, 21:30:50 UTC

I'd say they are both familiar, and in character- at least in character the way I would have preferred them to be and remain. Seth became insufferable far too soon and lost any appeal for that reason, T.T. became downright intolerable to me by the time of "The My Two Dads." Having both of them, at the very least retaining what could have been positive qualities is a huge plus.