[Fic] Status: It's Complicated

Aug 02, 2010 20:45

Title: Status: It’s Complicated
Rating/Warnings: R
Summary: Med school student, Arthur Kirkland, meets freshman Alfred F. Jones. Again.

( Here at dreamwidth because this oneshot got out of control and dreamwidth doesn't have character limits. )

hetalia, fic

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shiyasim August 3 2010, 20:16:30 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! :D

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kilehye August 3 2010, 07:23:34 UTC
Wow, that was beautiful.. Ahh man, I am so not good with words, but I so totally immensely enjoyed reading every word. <3

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shiyasim August 3 2010, 20:18:01 UTC
Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it!!! ♥♥

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monochroact August 3 2010, 07:44:35 UTC
This.

This has to be one of the most amazing AUs I've ever read. Srsly, I stayed till almost 3am reading it cause I couldn't stop! (Also, I'm so glad you didn't make this a chaptered fic, cause I'd be dying from the anxiety every time.)

Where do I start? I loved the Bad Friends Trio to bits. Francis teasing Arthur was hilarious, and the things Gilbert did and said when he was drunk (and even when he wasn't).

Your Alfred and Arthur just fit my headcanon so well. I do think Alfred's a jock with geek tendencies, and baww, Arthur personality is just so him.

Their background was beautiful too. I loved how you wrote it so it seemed that they were going to repeat the same mistakes, but they didn't!

I could mention all these little things that made me adore this fic, but that would be too much xD In summary, I loved it!

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shiyasim August 3 2010, 20:23:25 UTC
Wow thank you so much! Ahh sorry I should have probably warned that it's pretty long lol. Aha and it's already finished so usually if I'm already done writing, I'll just post the whole thing! (since I really hate waiting for updates too!)

Ahh and thanks!! I love the Bad Co Trio too. Well, in canon, Alfred really is a technology nerd and a jock who cares too much about working out & diets, right? :D It's cute though!

Thank you so much for your comment!!! I'm glad you liked it!

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OH HOLY-- satancat August 3 2010, 21:15:42 UTC
Umm. Totally commenting here because I don't have a dreamwidth account. Anyways, my commenting!fail aside,

OH. MY. GOD. This was so completely epic. I love love LOVE how you portrayed everyone in the AU--it's sooo convincing and in line with my headcanon, haha. Classic jock+nerd combo is the best thing EVER for Alfred, and you just completely nailed it in this fic. Just--all the video games, the programming savvy, bff-ery with Kiku--augh, perfect. And ENGLAND. Oh, England. I love how he's basically the source of all the complication in It's Complicated. But his psychological and social problems are so perfect as well! Oh my god. And the SuFin!! I can't even *__* yesssss

And YOU. are the reigning champion of fantastic one-liners!!
“I am not Chinese. I’m Taiwanese,”
COMPLETELY necessary *nods*
“And you look like roadkill,” Arthur answered. “All the bloody time
AHAHAHAHAHA
Gilbert nodded sagely. “You’re right, young Al,” he said, slapping Alfred on the shoulder. “No one will be able to see my awesome tricks! I’ll do it in the morning ( ... )

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Re: OH HOLY-- shiyasim August 4 2010, 18:36:58 UTC
Omg thank you so much for your comment!!!
Haha I just wanted to write a fic where their relationships are really similar to the ones in canon (even though it's AU) so their interactions would be more or less the same too!!
Ahhh I'm so glad you liked those little lame jokes in the fic!! I think everyone I know who is Taiwanese ALWAYS says that anytime someone says they're Chinese lolol. And the roadkill one... actually when I wrote it at first, I didn't even notice since it's normal British slang! And later I was like "Haha such a terrible pun!" Of course invisible Canada!
Bad Touch Trio normally is already pretty terrible, but I imagine them to be absolutely hilarious when they're drunk lolol.

Thank you so much for leaving your super nice comment!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

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shiyasim August 4 2010, 18:38:06 UTC
Thank you so so so much!!! Haha of course I plan to write more too!! I'm so glad you liked it!! ♥♥♥

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