[Fic] Status: It's Complicated

[shiyasim]

Title: Status: It’s Complicated
Rating/Warnings: R
Summary: Med school student, Arthur Kirkland, meets freshman Alfred F. Jones. Again.

( Here at dreamwidth because this oneshot got out of control and dreamwidth doesn't have character limits. )

Comments

OH HOLY--

[satancat]

Umm. Totally commenting here because I don't have a dreamwidth account. Anyways, my commenting!fail aside,

OH. MY. GOD. This was so completely epic. I love love LOVE how you portrayed everyone in the AU--it's sooo convincing and in line with my headcanon, haha. Classic jock+nerd combo is the best thing EVER for Alfred, and you just completely nailed it in this fic. Just--all the video games, the programming savvy, bff-ery with Kiku--augh, perfect. And ENGLAND. Oh, England. I love how he's basically the source of all the complication in It's Complicated. But his psychological and social problems are so perfect as well! Oh my god. And the SuFin!! I can't even *__* yesssss

And YOU. are the reigning champion of fantastic one-liners!!
“I am not Chinese. I’m Taiwanese,”
COMPLETELY necessary *nods*
“And you look like roadkill,” Arthur answered. “All the bloody time
AHAHAHAHAHA
Gilbert nodded sagely. “You’re right, young Al,” he said, slapping Alfred on the shoulder. “No one will be able to see my awesome tricks! I’ll do it in the morning"
I WANT TO SEE THIS SCENE IRL. Drunk!BTTrio was complete genius.

"What are you? Invisible?”
THIS. Heaven almighty, I actually laughed out loud in lab today--good thing my supervisor is out.

Ugh, I need to stop quoting your own fic back at you x__x

Seriously, THANK YOU for this magnificent piece of awesome! I nearly missed like three timers going off because I was so engrossed in your sexy, hilarious, absolutely fantabulous fic. XDDDDDDD I am so stalking your writing now >:DDD

Re: OH HOLY--

[shiyasim]

Omg thank you so much for your comment!!!
Haha I just wanted to write a fic where their relationships are really similar to the ones in canon (even though it's AU) so their interactions would be more or less the same too!!
Ahhh I'm so glad you liked those little lame jokes in the fic!! I think everyone I know who is Taiwanese ALWAYS says that anytime someone says they're Chinese lolol. And the roadkill one... actually when I wrote it at first, I didn't even notice since it's normal British slang! And later I was like "Haha such a terrible pun!" Of course invisible Canada!
Bad Touch Trio normally is already pretty terrible, but I imagine them to be absolutely hilarious when they're drunk lolol.

Thank you so much for leaving your super nice comment!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!