Of Fake Fairytales and Faux Amour - Chapter 5 (Pt.2)

[shivasan]

I had to cut the post in two parts cause the chapter is too long apparently and lj won't let me post it XD

And again, huge thanks to llamaramauk for being such an awesome beta :)

Title: Of Fake Fairytales and Faux Amour
Authors: Lyrical Rawr & Shiva
Pairing: Fake!? Phoenix/Edgeworth
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Humor/Romance
Warnings: Swearing, possible SPOILERS

Comments

[fancy_clafre]

Gwahahaha, this is so awesome. Makes me wish I could write well.

Keep goin' cuz I wanna see where this train wreck's a'rollin'. And I mean that in the best way possible. :'D

[shivasan]

Ahah thank you :)
Glad you're enjoying our silly story XD
Btw, your icon made me LOL

[xfwee]

LMAO, stupid Wright and his milky coffee. This is my favorite story ever. Cannot wait until the next chapter!

[shivasan]

Ahahah, I'm not sure Edgeworth found the coffee thing really funny though XD

And... your favorite story ever? Why, thank you :) I feel special now XD

[lensu]

I had a craving for some PW fanfiction and told myself I would go to bed at the end of each chapter...and before I knew it, I had read the lot XD

You're characterisations are fantastic, and your OCs sound like they stepped right out of the game.

At points I actually found myself laughing out loud, epecially the ending of this chapter.

I eagerly await the next chapter!

[shivasan]

Ahah, sorry we deprived you of your sleep XD
But writing this chapter has given me a bad case of insomnia, so I guess it's fair :P

I'm glad you like the OCs, we spend a lot of time thinking of good ones, and it's always nice to see we managed to do the game justice :)

And I'm glad it made you laugh. If people have as much fun reading it as we have writing it, then I'm happy :)

Thank you for the kind words!

[angelogdarknes]

There are no words sufficient enough to express how awesome you are for writing something like this ♥ Not only do I love the idea of Edgeworth having to pretend to date Phoenix to keep his fangirls at bay, but your writing does it total justice.

“You’re such a pain in the ass! Get back in there and finish what you started, you jerk!” This line had me giggling harder than I have in a while, just because all the previous dialog sounded so much like very subtle innuendo, and this line just makes your mind go right to the gutter X3

Can't wait until your next update, especially since this fic turned a very bad day into an enjoyable one~

[shivasan]

I'm glad it made your day better :) It's always nice to know something you're writing can bring some smiles and giggles ^^;

And ahahah, glad that line made you laugh XD I always love when readers point out what they liked, it helps us figure out what we're doing right :)

Thank you for reading! Now your kind words have made MY day better already ^^

[shivasan]

THANKS FOR THE CAPSLOCKS!!! XD

I'm glad you like the pace :) I'm used to writing shorter fics myself, so it's kind of a personal challenge to be writing a multi-chapter story. It's a lot of work and very time-consuming, but it's well worth it if the readers enjoy it as much as you seem to be enjoying it :)

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! ♥