myh first fanfic. dunt flaem.

[japanisbetter]

 

Comments

[cartoonnerd]

Um...Will. How do you know that Japan calls their classes Years 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, etc? Just because they do that in England doesn't mean that they do it in Japan as well.

Also, I think that Chastity's happy with her boyfriend. You should leave her alone.

[japanisbetter]

but kaede-chan dos luv me. :(:(:(:(:( she just dusnt know it yet.

[japanisbetter]

oh + my name is wiriamu u baka.

[neuroliaranger]

Oh, hell yeah. AK's awesome and 10000% more tolerable than Mr. Nippophile here.

[daisy_the_mage1]

Chastity really isn't going to like you for this.

Also, Leah Dizon is American and BoA is actually Korean. They aren't Japanese.

[neuroliaranger]

I thought it was obvious from day 1.

[protectchildren]

If it weren't for the atrocious spelling and grammar or the violence or the references to kidnapping then this could have been an okay fic for my children.

[kairiisaslut]

why did u put sora in? he sux. altho clod is cool.

[japanisbetter]

sora iz col tho. he iz frum a jap video game.

[kairiisaslut]

no he isnt. he is a fuking moron.

[sorakh28]

He's smarter than you, so I doubt he's a fucking moron.

[hatechristians]

How laughable. Not only are the spelling and grammar atrocious but you also wrote a stereotypical high school fic by putting yourself and Chastity together. If you had done something more originaly and interesting like pairing yourself up with Kurado or Sora then I would have tolerated it more.

Throw this piece of trite away.

[japanisbetter]

u baka. im not gay.