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sarajayechan April 14 2007, 23:35:58 UTC
*is utterly slain*

You're a hell of a writer. Poor Luigi, I hope it didn't rain out there. XD

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queergoomba April 14 2007, 23:46:03 UTC
I was going to have a little breakfast scene with Luigi and Mario, and Mario wondering why his bum felt sore, but I felt that was a little too much and I was almost out of inspiration. ^^;;;;

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princessawesome April 14 2007, 23:39:12 UTC
Sigh. Cliched hero/villain hot mansex pairing. However, you do get credit for not "bishie-fying" the characters. Next time, try to have the kiss draw a little blood, doesn't Bowser have sharp teeth? Hell, even without sharp teeth, rough kisses draw blood and hurt like a bitch.

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threesomesftw April 14 2007, 23:41:53 UTC
Damn, who knew Essie was such a tiger in bed? XD

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princessawesome April 14 2007, 23:43:39 UTC
SHUT THE FUCK UP!

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queergoomba April 14 2007, 23:48:31 UTC
Mario and Bowser aren't supposed to be bishified. oO;;;

Yes, Bowser has sharp teeth. That's why he rubs rather than nibbles. I can imagine 'cause of the weight difference, Mario'd get bruised quite a bit. =D It's a Mariofic, it's supposed to be comedic, not grisly.

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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW axempurple April 14 2007, 23:39:14 UTC
EWEWEWEWEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

I CAM BAK ONLIN@ 4 DIZZZZZZZZZZZZZ EWWWWWWWWWWWW BOWSER/MARIO EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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Re: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW queergoomba April 14 2007, 23:49:19 UTC
It's good to see you again Michelle! It's fun seeing your favorite character with your least, isn't it? =DDD

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mayxdecemberotp April 14 2007, 23:39:55 UTC
...oh, my. *laughs herself silly* This was quite good!

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queergoomba April 14 2007, 23:50:48 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! =DD

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threesomesftw April 14 2007, 23:41:13 UTC
Well, it's about damn time you showed off your writing! XD Good show, Steph!

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queergoomba April 14 2007, 23:51:17 UTC
I'm happy to know Mario approves. =D And there'll be more in the future!

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