Comments | shipmateee: [fic] you look at me (it's like you hit me with lightning)

shipmateee

[fic] you look at me (it's like you hit me with lightning)

Mar 11, 2010 01:31

you look at me (it's like you hit me with lightning)
luke/percy ; percy jackson fiction ; 2.703 words ; nc-17
| He can’t decide whether to cry out or laugh, and even if he did, he’d never get the chance considering Luke has his lips firmly captured in a kiss |

warnings: dub-con, underage
a/n: set on the princess andromeda during the sea of ( Read more... )

fic, [movie] percy jackson, [book] percy jackson, [pairing] luke/percy

Comments 146

venacavaa March 12 2010, 01:39:45 UTC

I've only finished the first paragraph and I'm already wtaf-ing. You're perfect.

His first actually, but he’s trying not to think about that too much.
YES. MFY. WHY IS THAT SO FUCKING AMAZING?

shipmateee March 12 2010, 15:12:20 UTC

NO YOU'RE PERFECT.

I LOVE THE IDEA OF LUKE STEALING PERCY'S FIRST KISS. I WANT TO WRITE A WHOLE OTHER FIC ABOUT IT, LIKE BASED AT CAMP HALF BLOOD, WHEN PERCY'S TWELVE AND LUKE IS SNEAKY AND AWESOME.

venacavaa March 13 2010, 00:06:30 UTC

THIS IS SO SPOT-ON. BECAUSE LUKE WOULD HAVE TO STEAL PERCY'S FIRST KISS SINCE HE'D BE ALL SHY ABOUT IT AND OFC LUKE STEALS ALL THE OTHER KISSES SINCE PERCY IS LIKE OMG WHAT IF SOMEBODY SEES?! (But, it's not like he's ashamed of Luke, he just doesn't want anyone to see him kissing someone else because he's all shy and insecure and cute) RIGHT? I think so.

venacavaa March 12 2010, 01:41:19 UTC

frisson.
WORD WIN. JUST LETTING YOU KNOW.

shipmateee March 12 2010, 15:13:00 UTC

AKJSHDGKJDSHGLKJ THIS ♥

I KNEW YOU'D FIND THE GOOD WORDS, I KNEW IT~

venacavaa March 13 2010, 03:30:59 UTC

OH YES, I ALWAYS DO. EVERYTIME WE TALK, I'M LOOKING OUT FOR YOUR MIND-BLOWING VOCABULARY.

venacavaa March 12 2010, 01:43:06 UTC

FUCK. I'm only at the end of paragraph two, and this is comment number three.
goshdarn you, beth.

He smiles down at him winningly with a dangerous glint in his eyes that Percy is increasingly wary of the longer it’s directed at him.
Yeah. Predatory Luke and Victim Percy.
♥

shipmateee March 12 2010, 15:13:44 UTC

FUCK. I LOVE YOU SFM AMANDA YOU HAVE NO IDEA. THESE COMMENTS ARE MAKING MY LIFE RN.

venacavaa March 13 2010, 03:31:44 UTC

:D
ILUSFM2. THESE COMMENT REPLIES ARE MAKING MY LIFE AS WELL, JSYK.

venacavaa March 12 2010, 01:44:04 UTC

Percy can feel his heart hammering against his ribs like a bird caught in a cage.
SUCH AN ACE SIMILE.

shipmateee March 12 2010, 15:14:51 UTC

KJAHDGFAJKDSFHG I KNEW YOU'D PICK UP ON THAT, IT WAS LIKE, ONE OF MY FAVOURITE PARTS.

I TEND TO USE BIRD IMAGERY A LOT IN MY FIC. IDEK WHY. I JUST LOVE IT A LOT.

venacavaa March 13 2010, 03:35:13 UTC

ONE OF YOUR FAVORITE PARTS YOU SAY? DAMN, I'M GOOD. EXCEPT, I HAVE TO FIND THESE OTHER FAVORITE PARTS THEN. BRB. TEARING THIS FIC UP TO FIND THEM.

AND SO I CHECKED OUT YOUR MASTERLIST, BECAUSE LIKE I SAID IN A COMMENT OVER AT YOUR ICON COMMUNITY, I JUST CHECK OUT YOUR BRILLIANCE WHEN I'M BORED. EVEN IF I HAVE OTHER THINGS THAT NEED TO BE DONE. AND WHILE CHECKING OUT YOUR MASTERLIST I NOTICED SOME JOE/MILEY FRIENDSHIPNESS WITH A HUMMINGBIRD'S WINGS SIMILE IN THE TITLE. AND I INSTANTLY CLICKED ON IT AND THOUGHT OH THAT'S SO BETH OF HER AND ILI.

But yeah, so I'll be reading that too...and the one with comas and car crashes because I started that one and the style is so surreal, but I'm going to need to dedicate some time and effort into reading that masterpiece, so I'll do that tomorrow.

shipmateee March 14 2010, 00:47:56 UTC

omfg i can't believe you're looking at some of my miley/joe fics. like, i am not a serious shipper of them or anything, i just really liked the idea of writing them lmao. they're adorable <3

jsyk, i am especially proud of the comas and car crashes one, because, idek. i really liked the style of it, and there's one part in there that i am just so, so, so proud of, not that i'm totally conceited or anything, i just, seriously, i love it a lot. i wonder if you'll find it (you usually do lmao).

venacavaa March 12 2010, 01:46:04 UTC

hanging his head down in hot frustration.
I don't even know if this counts as alliteration, but I still love it with all my heart because the mental image and the actual words chosen are just fantabulous.
Yeah, even me and my vocabulary had to make up a word to even begin to describe how great all of this is.

(I'll be spamming this bitch like no other, jsyk.)

shipmateee March 12 2010, 15:16:45 UTC

I LOVE HOW YOU ARE BEING SUCH AN ENGLISH STUDENT ABOUT THIS FIC, LIKE "OH! VOCAB! SIMILE! ALLITERATION!"

IT'S AWESOME, JSYK, BECAUSE I TOTES GET IT, AND AJKSHGDJDKFGH I LOVE COMMENTS ON MY ACTUAL WRITING.

venacavaa March 13 2010, 03:36:28 UTC

LOL, WHEN I WAS COMMENTING, ALL I COULD THINK WAS BETH'S GONNA GET A KICK OUT OF MY LITERARY DEVICE ANALYSIS WITH MY SIMILE! ALLITERATION! FLAILING.

I LOVE COMMENTING ON YOUR ACTUAL WRITING, SO IT'S A PERFECT MATCH, YES?