[fic] you look at me (it's like you hit me with lightning)

[shipmateee]

you look at me (it's like you hit me with lightning)
luke/percy ; percy jackson fiction ; 2.703 words ; nc-17
| He can’t decide whether to cry out or laugh, and even if he did, he’d never get the chance considering Luke has his lips firmly captured in a kiss |

warnings: dub-con, underage
a/n: set on the princess andromeda during the sea of

Comments

[shipmateee]

SO THEY CAN HAVE A SECOND FIRST-TIME, DUH

[shipmateee]

PFFFT, YEAH, BUT HE WON'T KNOW THAT AND LUKE WILL HARDLY CARE SINCE HE KNOWS THE ~TRUTH~

omf

[azalee_calypso]

*mind : blown*
Okay, you know, it's rare that I stick around or do much more than just quickly skimming when porn gets to really describing the penetrating part. Especially when it's really detailed and explicit. It's not usually the hottest part for me, I tend to like the seducing and foreplay parts better.
But this ?
Kept my attention for every single word and was one of the hottest things I've ever read.
Characters were IC, motivations were twisted, Luke was fucking sexy, and your words choice was simply great. No clichés phrases, no distracting euphemisms, veeery nice verbs and descriptions - I love "Luke peppers feather-light kisses down Percy’s spine" ♥
so yes general LOVE.
I'll be off somewhere dying from a nosebleed ♥

Re: omf

[shipmateee]

AKJSDGHFAJKSDHGJKDSHFG LEE ♥
ALL OF YOUR COMMENTS WERE JUST AMAZING. LIKE, I JUST HAVE THIS HUGE GRIN ON MY FACE NOW RN.

Characters were IC, motivations were twisted, Luke was fucking sexy, and your words choice was simply great. No clichés phrases, no distracting euphemisms, veeery nice verbs and descriptions - I love "Luke peppers feather-light kisses down Percy’s spine" ♥
All of this has just made my life. Ahhh, just seriously, in-depth comments like this are fantastic. Also, I was feeling really wary with this fic, because I felt like the writing wasn't really that great, but you've just made me feel so much better :D

AJSHDGFJKDSGH SRSLY. THIS COMMENT. JUST AMAZING.

Re: omf

[azalee_calypso]

IF THIS IS HOW YOU GET FROM A REVIEW, HOW DO YOU THINK THE FIC MADE ME FEEL?
♥
Cuz your fic is what was just amazing, love ;3

[yellowwolf5]

fsdgdfsd, that was sooo hot! Luke was all evil which is kinda hot!! ♥
Aww, why did he have to take Percy's memories?
Loved it!

[shipmateee]

Ahh, thank you so much! Evil Luke is kind of my favourite >:D

[shipmateee]

LOL THIS

and i think i might because you and that icon are so persuasive. fuckfuckfuck that icon.

[shipmateee]

SRSLY

[trohmaniac13]

HOLY FUCK.

[shipmateee]

GOOD HOLY FUCK OR BAD HOLY FUCK?

[trohmaniac13]

'AWESOME AS FUCK' HOLY FUCK.

[shipmateee]

ASDAGDKALHGJFJDS THANK YOU ♥