All The Little Things You Do

Apr 13, 2010 18:20

I awake; you’re next to me. I smile as I breathe in. You smell like you always do - of dreams and magic. I find myself trapped in your arms, but really, I don’t mind. You take in a deep breath, and slowly, your eyes open as well. You smile, and my heart starts pounding in my chest. You’ve never been much of a morning person, and yet I’ve never ( Read more... )

pairing: onew/key, fandom: shinee, !fanfic, author: lynlovesmin, rating: g

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2pmconspiracy April 13 2010, 10:28:30 UTC
Hello dear! Spot first :D

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lynlovesmin April 13 2010, 13:09:49 UTC
HELLO!
oh whoops, caps lock. :\
:D

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2pmconspiracy April 16 2010, 10:49:45 UTC
Okay I am FINALLY replying to this! Sorry it took me so long cos I had too many stupid tests to study for D: in return, I shall torture my fingers and leave you a nice long comment ( ... )

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joiceechan April 13 2010, 10:33:08 UTC
I love the way it's written. How I love to cuddle someone like this
when it's raining. :D
And how Jinki nagged about the harmful effects of coffee=cute!
Onkey is lurv!

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lynlovesmin April 13 2010, 13:11:14 UTC
ahh yes, i love rainy days.
i just wish i had someone to cuddle with though,
rofl, idk jinki seems like the kind of person who would do that.
in my head, it was jinki who made kibum's coffee every morning,
and added in tons of milk, just because he could get away with it XD

yepyep, onkey is ♥

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mistresalie April 13 2010, 11:45:07 UTC
i just got soaked coming home D: but this totally cheered me up. it's super sweet : ) i wish everyone could have a day off like this and relax like this with SHINee. jkjk!~
lol coffee became latte?
the fanart is so beautiful~ and your fic suits it perfectly c:
if people knew how to treasure the little things, life would be so much better :)

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lynlovesmin April 13 2010, 13:31:35 UTC
awwww, i would love to walk in the rain *____*
lol yeah SHINee makes everything better.
rainy days are romantic, what can i say?
lol yeah.
jinki's worried for kibum's health. XD
i just fell in love with the fanart when i saw it ♥
ikr?
the little things you do, make the world go round. :'D

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mistresalie April 13 2010, 14:31:12 UTC
i totally agree
but i was in uniform
and a jacket
heavy bag
plastic bag with just painted puppet
it got wet so some paint came off D:
i'd love to walk in the rain if i was wearing NORMAL clothes :p
:D
milk can make people more sleepy. ;D [okay kinda random.]
yea like how littering can make the world stop D: but taking lesser time to shower can save loads of water [but i dont D:]

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lynlovesmin April 16 2010, 00:59:37 UTC
ahhh, the inevitable getting soaked in a uniform curse.
i just ran in the ran a few minutes ago.
in uniform.
but i wasn't carrying anything. so yeah.
coffee has slow effect on me.
after drinking it, i fall asleep.
then several hours later, I wake up, and can't go back to sleep.
XD

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onkeyloves April 13 2010, 14:22:39 UTC
HELLO SWEET ^^
okay, i know i still owe you loads of comments but i really am too tired tonight, i shall comment on the rest tomorrow 8D (though i said that the other time too -.-)

okay, i found this

Go back to sleep, you tell me, it’s early.

very very sweet. LIKE AWWWW. so cute ^^ and gah, i don't is it related to the fact that i love sleep but AWWW. so adorably sweet!

and of course all the "i love the way you..." are terribly sweet too ♥

yay babe, this is great and i am glad this came out like that!
love you <33

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lynlovesmin April 16 2010, 00:50:40 UTC
HELLO^^
late reply,
ugh, I'm so lazy nowadays.
scratch that, I'm even more lazy nowadays.
it's fine~~~
I've given up replying.
I'M SO SORRY TO THOSE WHO COMMENTED D8

hahaha, taken from my fantasy actually.
I'd melt if my boyfriend told me to go back to sleep.
like ajdshflahsd.
lol pffft, you're like the older, more mature (slightly more crazy maybe) version of me.
WHICH IS GOOD.
BECAUSE YOU ARE AWESOME.
THEREFORE I AM AWESOME.
YAY US^^

i've always imagined jinki as the type of person who drinks milk coffee.
idk,
i think it's because i like milk coffee.
rofl.

I don't love you.
rofl, i'm kidding.
you know I love you (;

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onkeyloves April 16 2010, 04:41:46 UTC
LOL, so am i.
I'm lazier than the laziest o.o
i just don't feel like replying most of the time :/
though i feel bad. tsk.

YEAHYEAHYEAH!
i would too. so sweet! GAHHHH.
lol, why am i crazier!
but yay! we're similar 8D
YAY YAY YAY 8D

lol, ah. i like milk tea.
like kibum with his me2day update 8D
idk, but i love milk coffee too <3

how could you break my heart,
even if it's just a second. lmao.
you know i love you too (:

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rinni1905 April 13 2010, 15:26:08 UTC
Aw, so cute, and I notice that this skin has the colour of pink and green, the colour represent for Onew and Key :)).

Key cannot drink pure coffee anyway, but keep nagging him, Jinki ah, because it is so cute :). Love this!!!!

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lynlovesmin April 16 2010, 00:51:49 UTC
lol yeah!
umma + appa = babies♥♥♥

jinki is always adorable, yes?

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