EDIT [11 Nov 2010] I Dreamed A Dream Part 2, posted! ♥
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Byakuran's POVSo, 'sup guys :D Work is, as always, stressful with a little mix of boring. And my tv-show/manga/anime backlog, is always, never ending. LOL I can't wait for November, which means Halloween parties and horror movies. Along with
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re: fic. I LOVE YOU. AGAIN. Ahhh, this has just the right amount of Inception influence to make it completely fascinating without overwhelming any of the story or the characters. Your Shouichi is as flawlessly Shouichi as ever, though for some reason Byakuran sounded kind of valley girl-ish in my head, this time around. The whole thing was just captivating *_* A-AND THE FORMAT. Man, I've never been able to format scene/perspective shifts in a way that wasn't ridiculous to look at (yay italics =A=) BUT YOU'VE DONE SO, and I commend you for this. THUS ENDS MY POINTLESS COMMENTARY OF THE DAY BECAUSE I'M NOT TALKATIVE TODAY, SOB.
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re: fic - WOOT ♥♥♥ I actually started writing this the moment I got home from watching Inception so that makes me a super slow writer orz so there's definitely (a lot of) influences 8D Byakkun strikes me as someone who'd use a cutesy way of speaking, but maybe I overdid it? OTL
...I changed the formatting probably ten times before I settled on this LOL I'm glad (and very very relieved) that you didn't find the formatting / scene shifts confusing XDDDD
Anyway. YES. *loves you too ♥*
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The cutesy way of speaking makes sense (and the hearts are pretty much canon in my mind), it was just a couple of things like the drawn out "soooo" and the "totally."
NO THEY WEREN'T CONFUSING AT ALL, IT WAS GREAT. ♥
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I've finished season 1 and am now moving on to season 2! The Reid-memory that stands out to me is his kissing scene on the swimming pool orz
Anyway, my Shiki-fangirling nakama, I have added more confusingness to this fic, so! ♥
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UBER UBER UBER LATE REPLY OTL OTL OTL
I've been rather occupied with NaNoWriMo (what did I just get myself into?!) so. Yes. ♥ *collects brain cells as peace offering*
I have continued (AND COMPLETED :D) the mindscrew fic, so. I hope you read it :D :D :D (Or rather, I hope it makes sense OTL)
...it's not kidnapping if I'm willing? *shot*
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What have you done to my BYAKURAAAAAAAN~???!!!!! What did Shoichi DOOOO??!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh!! The onslaught of questions are driving me MAD!! *huff huff* This is THE MOST SUSPENSEFUL story you have ever wrote yet!!1!
Why are you doing this to meeeee!!! xDDDD ZOMGWARSH!! I can't stand not knowing! Okay- I conclude to a certain degree- that Byakuran's dead and Shoichi's put himself into a coma-state-like dream...similar to the Movie Inception. Although, I find it confusing that Shoichi would have to scrap-by with money to use this Dream Tool, if he is the creator, or so I think it is implied. Moving on, I thought it was interesting how the decease are speaking to Shoichi through the Dream world- tis a fun way to breath life into advance technology, makes it all the more bone-chilling and exciting. I can't wait to find out what puzzles you will be piecing together for us in the next chapter!! xDDD
I anxiously wait in baited breath. Thank you so much for sharing!!!
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Mindscrewy-suspense stories are my favorite to read, so I guess I'm trying to write them out as well? XD
I have posted the final part of the oneshot, as well as the alternate ending(s) and parallel story, so I hope it clears up some questions? XD
Thank you for reading and commenting ♥♥♥
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