[Masuda x Tegoshi] Hidden [prologue/?]

[shin_sen]

Title: Hidden
Rating: PG-15
Pairing: MassuTego
Disclaimer: I don't own them.
Characters: Massu, Tego, Koyama, Kusano, Shige
Warning: Stalking, dark, angst, confusing
Beta-ed: janel_23
Notes: XD;

Comments

[apsharha]

oh it sounds super interesting! I look forward to read the first chapter! I want some rabu rabu moments between Massu and Tego! the two are just too cute to handle! At first, the way you tell the story is scary! I was like "noess I'm sure smth bad is gonna happen to this little boy!" I definetly don't agree with the fact they were separated but I guess they're gonna meet again *dreams*

Anyway, GAMBATTE for chapter one! I'll definetly read it *sends power*

[mknsen08]

We'll see what will happen in the first chapter. XDDD; I know, I think even I got scared with this part. XD

Yay, power~! AKIRAAA, GIVE ME NOBUTA POWER NO CHUNYU~! XD;

Thanks for reading!

[crimsonetoile]

Wow, really intriguing! O_O Poor little boy ;___; I can't wait for the next part! Well done because it's hard to built such a tension in a story!

[mknsen08]

OHMY THANK YOU! X33

Thanks for reading!

[neko_no_yume]

I really like!! ^^

The way the prologue is written, it sounds like the calm before a storm and I can't wait to read how the rest will turn out!

I imagine Tegoshi won't be very mentally stable in this one but then again he pulls it off so well.. ^^;;

[mknsen08]

Ahaha, so many guesses. XDD;

Thanks for reading!

[tesshi]

this *is* kind of freaky! LOL what happens next? hope you'll have the next chapter up before next week! XD

[mknsen08]

I know. XD; I hope that too. XD

Thanks for reading!

[cynicalism]

ah, late comment, but i must say that i really love the second person pov you're using. It's so hard to pull off :has tried and failed: but you do it very well!! the plot is very dark and interesting so far too, so i hope you shed some light on the story in the next chapter. (which i also hope will be coming soon? :D)

poor tego is always typecasted as the psychos, eh? xDDD though he does play the part so well...

yay more tegomass fics! :cheers:

[mknsen08]

Late comments are okay. X3 Thank you! :DD Oh, I will. NEWS members will play very interesting parts, I guess. XDD;

Ahaha, that's true. XD

Yay too! :D

Thanks for reading!