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FIC: Scars (Colin/Romilda)

Aug 10, 2009 10:54

Title: Scars
Author: shiiki
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Colin Creevey/Romilda Vane
Fandom: Harry Potter
Word Count: 999

Summary: Romilda deals with the aftermath. Written for rarepair_shorts prompt 13: diagnosis.

Notes: This is the last part! After a year of working on this, whew! Previous parts can be found at the prompt table.

( Thank goodness, was her first thought when she saw him lying there )

tragic love story

Comments 5

ceirdwenfc August 10 2009, 04:04:37 UTC

I like how at the end she's moving on after a year. Still so very sad. Nicely done.

shiiki August 10 2009, 04:08:09 UTC

This was destined to end sadly from the beginning, unfortunately.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

rose_starr August 11 2009, 03:46:52 UTC

Oh honey, you've ended this wonderfully! I feel so badly for Romilda - her pain is palpable and true - and the ending was simply perfect, that she was seeing someone somewhat like Colin but that she hadn't forgotten him!! ♥

Great job!!

shiiki August 11 2009, 05:21:50 UTC

Thank you! I was always worried about the ending because I knew what had to happen, and I really wanted to find a balance for Romilda ... you know, not making light of her feelings, but not drowning in angst either.

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shiiki August 13 2009, 01:41:55 UTC

Thanks! I know this is such a rarepair - I haven't been able to find other fics on it either, so all I can do is write it myself! :P

I'm glad you gave them a try and happy to hear that you enjoyed it. Thank you for letting me know!