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Good Neighbors, Part 2 (sequel to my lovefest entry)

May 19, 2008 21:42

Good Neighbors, Part 2E stood gaping at Hot Guy-Jack Twist-for a moment or two, then remembered himself and managed a smile. “Yeah, hey,” he said. “Uh . . . pleased to meet you ( Read more... )

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shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:48:27 UTC

I always see Jack in both ways--he is cocksure (in all the senses of the word that you can think of . . .) but also willing to be vulnerable and open to the possibilities of love (I saw that in Mo Eilean Jack too!). :) Thanks so much for reading. And yeah, I always thought the Pillsbury Doughboy needed a little rewriting . . .

bbmbeliever May 20 2008, 11:57:43 UTC

I'm glad you finished this! And I am very excited to hear that you have a new multi-chapter story in mind.

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:48:43 UTC

Thanks for reading! I will try to post the new one soon. :)

annabuffy May 20 2008, 12:53:00 UTC

This was a hot second part. But, I liked how it ended. Wouldn't mind reading more on this fic if you wrote it.

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:49:07 UTC

I'm thinking about a part 3--hopefully in a couple of weeks after I get the new story started. Thanks for reading!

jacks_key May 20 2008, 14:27:18 UTC

I was so excited to see an update to this very hot story! Thank you!

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:49:31 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :) I'm loving Crush right now too . . .

bagel1 May 20 2008, 14:49:06 UTC

Oh my!! Oh my!! Oh my. Thank you so much for this extremely hot sequel. The last sentence is one of the sexiest things I've ever read. Could we have more? Pretty please :) it would just be wrong to leave us hanging like this :(

Joanne XX:)

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:49:54 UTC

Indeed, I am thinking of a part 3--will keep you posted. Thanks so much for reading! :)