Comments | shieldmaid1: Good Neighbors, Part 2 (sequel to my lovefest entry)

shieldmaid1

Good Neighbors, Part 2 (sequel to my lovefest entry)

May 19, 2008 21:42

Good Neighbors, Part 2E stood gaping at Hot Guy-Jack Twist-for a moment or two, then remembered himself and managed a smile. “Yeah, hey,” he said. “Uh . . . pleased to meet you ( Read more... )

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brokeback1963 May 20 2008, 05:36:27 UTC

Oh my!!! It's seven am here and I have to go work, but later I'll read this and tel you how much I love it, because I'm gonna love it for sure!! I can't believe you finally wrote the second part!!! Yayayayay!!!

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:44:27 UTC

I can't believe it either! Thanks for reading. :)

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shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:44:40 UTC

Thank you! That is very kind. :)

madbottoms May 20 2008, 06:41:50 UTC

Wonderful sequel and of course happy ending. *sigh*

Looking forward to seeing a new story.

Hugs

Sandy

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:45:23 UTC

Thanks! I had fun writing it and remembering all the other great lovefest entries. The new story should be up soon, sometime next week after I get back from my camping trip. Take care--

sweetje May 20 2008, 07:16:12 UTC

I loved this story! Thank you for writing the sequel. It shows Jack and Ennis getting to know one another better in a most intimate way.
I enjoyed the part in which Ennis sits on Jack's lap and they look at Jack's house together. And Jack's comment was wonderful. I'm sure it made Ennis feel 10 feet tall.
Please keep writing. I love your creations. In fact, I wouldn't mind another installment to this story...hint...hint... : )
Debra

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:46:02 UTC

I'm definitely thinking about a part 3 now, though it won't happen until I've gotten into the new story. But soon! Thanks for reading and leaving such a kind comment. :)

poppyhoney_67 May 20 2008, 08:48:27 UTC

Oh that was gorgeous, Jen! so glad you got back into this, to give us what we all wanted...mmm, that Jack Twist sure is sexy, and Ennis - well, you know how I feel about him. The sex was just so hot, and I loved the Rufus connection and the baker images....ennis in an apron, oh my.

Can't wait to read your new story....I love the idea already!! :)

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:47:10 UTC

Thanks, C! That is so kind of you. The whole baker conversation made me LOL here--just a little silliness on my part, I guess. I know I owe you an email--will try to write you tonight, before we're off to our camping trip in the morning. Thanks for your wonderful comments! xx Jen