Comments | shieldmaid1: Good Neighbors, Part 2 (sequel to my lovefest entry)

shieldmaid1

Good Neighbors, Part 2 (sequel to my lovefest entry)

May 19, 2008 21:42

Good Neighbors, Part 2E stood gaping at Hot Guy-Jack Twist-for a moment or two, then remembered himself and managed a smile. “Yeah, hey,” he said. “Uh . . . pleased to meet you ( Read more... )

lovefest, shieldmaid1, au!au

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camillar May 20 2008, 01:59:05 UTC

Yay for this, and Yay for new story!! :)
Camilla

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:41:46 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Watch out for the new one next week. :)

torry28 May 20 2008, 02:31:44 UTC

I'm so happy you wrote a sequel.
This was wonderful the silly story and the beautiful song but best of all they loved each other sweet and tenderly and Jack didn't leave as Ennis feared he would.
Thank you.
Torry

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:42:07 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. It was lots of fun to write. :)

sienata May 20 2008, 04:04:16 UTC

What a nice wrap up to that story. I reread part one, and it was sooo very hot, and then this one was equal parts hot and sweet, just perfect. I'm excited for the new story too. Glad you're finding time to write again. :)

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:42:51 UTC

Yes, I too am glad RL has calmed down a bit so I can get some *real* work done again. Thanks for reading and commenting!! I am enjoying all your writing too. : )

bbmgirlfan May 20 2008, 04:12:24 UTC

That was awesome!!

I re-read the first part and loved it all over again. Jack was so sweet to him.

I would love a part 3, though, where they talk about their history of watching each other and Jack explains what he saw that led to the affection he developed for Ennis.

Jeanine

shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:43:37 UTC

Hmm, good idea! Maybe I'll have to return and write that part, after I've gotten into the new story a bit. Thanks for the plot bunny--and for reading. It means a lot to me. :)

Good Neighbor Part 2 bmshirts May 20 2008, 05:03:43 UTC

Great sequel!! I love Jack's confidence that Ennis will invite him in and also to stay. Ennis is much stronger here than in most fan fiction. I love a strong Ennis, not willing to fuck and run as he usually does.
Great sex scene also. Those guys are sooo hot together!
My vote for Part 3!
Thanks. Carole

Re: Good Neighbor Part 2 shieldmaid1 May 21 2008, 21:44:12 UTC

Thanks for your very kind comment. :) I'll definitely do a part 3 sometime, just not sure exactly when. Stay tuned!