Pomp and Circumstances, chapter 3: Committee Work

[shieldmaid1]

Pomp and Circumstances

Chapter Three-Committee Work“Knock, knock

Comments

[ramona4jake]

I'm in complete dark too ! Who was the person that soothed Ennis ?! Why was Jack angry ? I don't like Randall... Anita knows something too ! God, it's like you're writing a thriller, so many mysteries !
Thank you, please up-date soon !

[shieldmaid1]

Hi! Thanks for reading--sorry about the long silence. My muse is back and I'm hoping to post the new chapter soon. :)

Pomp And Circumstance Chapter 3

[bmshirts]

Wow!! Was that Jack who groped Ennis? Or one of the girls? Alma? Randall, looking for Jack? Finding Jack and pissing him off? And why wouldn't Jack be pissed with a sleeze like Randall all hot after him?
I hope Jack and Ennis meet for that drink tonight and get this all sorted out.
Thanks. Carole

Re: Pomp And Circumstance Chapter 3

[shieldmaid1]

All will be revealed soon. Thanks for reading--sorry for the long wait. New chapter will be up soon. :)

[poppyhoney_67]

Oh wow what a chapter, so much going on!!!! I can tell that you know this area of work very well, Jen! You seem to be having lots of fun with it too...but god, do I love this Ennis, you seem to have given him a collection of interesting personality traits and also there are reminders of his past that you hint at, then leave us wondering

[shieldmaid1]

Hi C! Sorry about not writing in so long--it hasn't been a great couple of weeks here. But I'm working on this chapter and hope to have it up soon. More to come in a longer message. Hope you are well--and thanks so much for reading. xx Jen

[mariez65]

*applauds* Hot damn - I'm having the best time with this story! All the clever, but true-to-life details are framed within a lot of intrigue and with a really interesting cast of characters. You choreographed the scene in the gym so well - intense to say the least! Ennis and Jack have a great rapport-looking forward to more of that, especially. I'm still cringing (and laughing) and the thought of Randall's hot, moist, rotten banana-smelling hand - eeeeewwwww! Thanks!

Marie

[shieldmaid1]

Thanks so much for your very kind comments! This story is lots of fun to write, yes. I can picture these scenes exactly, having seen some of them play out in real life. New chapter soon--stay tuned! :)

[crackcoffee]

I hope it was Jack who had his arm around Ennis. But why did he leave the room and slam the door? And what's with the quirky Randall? Hm. Looking forward to more.

[shieldmaid1]

All will be revealed soon! Thanks for your patience--new chapter coming shortly. :)