Oh wow what a chapter, so much going on!!!! I can tell that you know this area of work very well, Jen! You seem to be having lots of fun with it too...but god, do I love this Ennis, you seem to have given him a collection of interesting personality traits and also there are reminders of his past that you hint at, then leave us wondering!
First off, does Anita fancy Ennis or am I imagining that??? I could just see her in that suit with the split in the skirt, and it seems that Ennis knows exactly who he fancies. But what happened to that drink they had planned? I hope they get to it soon.
I'm dying to know about this Jack to, he is one curious guy, and he seems to have a hold on Randall, so what's the history there?? He gives the creeps anyway, but that's just because he's Randall, I can't help it. It doesn't help when he concocts a ridiculous team-buildng exercise, although it did give Ennis a chance to get Jack's hands on him..phew, that was hot. Assuming, of course, those hands were Jack's....and where did Jack go, banging the door so loudly at the end?
You have left me hanging with so many questions Jen! I love it!! And you won't be updating until August...but I get to see you in a couple of weeks so I can grill you about future chapters then...I have bought you a ticket for TDK, so I think it only fair you trade that for some inside information....*winks*
Great stuff Jen, this is shaping up to be a brilliant, funny and intriguing story..
Hi C! Sorry about not writing in so long--it hasn't been a great couple of weeks here. But I'm working on this chapter and hope to have it up soon. More to come in a longer message. Hope you are well--and thanks so much for reading. xx Jen
First off, does Anita fancy Ennis or am I imagining that??? I could just see her in that suit with the split in the skirt, and it seems that Ennis knows exactly who he fancies. But what happened to that drink they had planned? I hope they get to it soon.
I'm dying to know about this Jack to, he is one curious guy, and he seems to have a hold on Randall, so what's the history there?? He gives the creeps anyway, but that's just because he's Randall, I can't help it. It doesn't help when he concocts a ridiculous team-buildng exercise, although it did give Ennis a chance to get Jack's hands on him..phew, that was hot. Assuming, of course, those hands were Jack's....and where did Jack go, banging the door so loudly at the end?
You have left me hanging with so many questions Jen! I love it!! And you won't be updating until August...but I get to see you in a couple of weeks so I can grill you about future chapters then...I have bought you a ticket for TDK, so I think it only fair you trade that for some inside information....*winks*
Great stuff Jen, this is shaping up to be a brilliant, funny and intriguing story..
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