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[shieldkitten]

100 fic challenge [#100.] Regrets, Zhoumi-centric
Title: 觅觅无敌 (Incomparable Mi Mi) Part 2
Length: 10,748 words
Author: shieldkitten
Beta: cynicalxcharm
Rating: G
Summary: Zhoumi strives to be better than average, because living his life any other way would only fill him with regret.

Part 1 | Part 3 | Author's Notes

Comments

[taylormercury]

this. wowowow. I'm not entirely sure what to even say but I loved this. This was fantastic. I wish I could leave you a better comment about why I enjoyed it so much, but coherency, it dislikes me today!

There were a lot of parts that really made me hurt for Zhoumi :( but it was the niceness, and the end, that really sort of brought emotions out for me. This was all so hard for him, but it gets better but its not all perfect and flowers and thats pretty realistic and ohgod Ryeo at the end there and just. I really, really liked this, it was an awesome indepth exploration of Zhoumi and the whole thing from his point of view, and I think you did it incredibly well.

My favourite part might have been the apples. That was sweet. AND CANADIAN APPLES ARE TASTY :D

Can I just give you ♥ for this, because my comment is fail 8D;

[meiface]

This section completely and totally broke my heart. I was fine for the first half of it, though sad, but as soon as I hit the part with the lunar new year dinner and Henry pulling away to talk to Zhou Mi and the rest of the members not quite noticing - I was gone