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[shieldkitten]

100 fic challenge [#100.] Regrets, Zhoumi-centric
Title: 觅觅无敌 (Incomparable Mi Mi) Part 2
Length: 10,748 words
Author: shieldkitten
Beta: cynicalxcharm
Rating: G
Summary: Zhoumi strives to be better than average, because living his life any other way would only fill him with regret.

Part 1 | Part 3 | Author's Notes

Comments

[shieldkitten]

Spot for dear_whimsy!

[dear_whimsy]

First paragraph. When you posted that in your LJ my heart like... fell out. ;_; No really. I scoff a lot at people who claim to get "OMG SO EMOTIONAL I CRIED!!!11" with celebrities, especially over tiny things, but Zhou Mi can hurt me like you can't believe. =((( So yes. That just. ;_; This just: One of the first things he does is to walk into a CD shop to look for a Wang Lee Hom CD, because he thinks that if they have room for Wang Lee Hom CDs here, then maybe they will have room for a tall, skinny Chinese boy who takes Korean lessons five times a week and still gets ㅅ mixed up with ㅈ. Augh. Possibly favourite line ever. IDK. IT'S SAD.

"Heck no," Kihoon says, and Zhoumi's smile fades a little.

DO YOU DO THIS ON PURPOSE. aw, but i do love Kihoon~

and he doesn't think the six tabs of high quality Wang Lee Hom fantaken pictures he's accidentally clicked open will help matters. You know, if this was in another fic by now I might've been like, "AUGH OMG WHY ANOTHER REFERENCE THIS IS OLD AND NOT FUNNY". But. It is still funny. It is

[shieldkitten]

OMFG WHAT A LONG COMMENT.

omg, I kept going back to my Wang Lee Hom references and wondering if I should take them out, really, because I was worried people would get annoyed like you so very clearly did (it's okay you can get annoyed at things). I should've had him practicing Korean or something!

NO I DON'T KNOW WHY. I don't even know why I did that, it just seemed like something he would to do so that Siwon wouldn't think he was going to be all ~*~Chinese~*~ and different.

Zhoumi is a terrible dancer, though, it's shocking. Prove me wrong or whatever.

I love my fic Henry, I kind of hope it spawns all sorts of cocky as hell fic Henrys all over the place. Enough of fics where he is shy and unsure and doesn't know how to tell Donghae/Zhoumi/Ryeowook how he feelsDid you get the irony where the hate at Henry wasn't personal and Zhoumi was wishing it on himself, and then later he gets hated on and it is COMPLETELY PERSONAL? I CAN'T STAND IT. Everyone is always 'nothing personal' at Henry, but with Zhoumi it's always like 'IDK, I just

[dear_whimsy]

LOL MSN CONVO:

MEI: What are you doing?
ME: Commenting~
MEI: ARE YOU SERIOUS
MEI: IT'S BEEN LIKE TWO HOURS
ME: T_T STFU

Hey hey hey! O: You misinterpreted me there! I wasn't annoyed by them, quite the contrary, and I thought I should point that out because it would've been easy for that trick to have gone wrong. Do I make sense? IDK. D:

LIES. And exactly! It made me sad because once again he is trying so hard and alsdkfjeisfj ;_;

XDD I think it's cute. It doesn't look very cool, but his body is really good at... slithering? Rolling? IDK. That thing where he just wiggles. XD

I love your Henry too. *___*

And oh snap, now that you've pointed it out. D: D: ARGH. ANGRY SMAAAAAAASH.

[shieldkitten]

Spot for cynicalxcharm!

[pureuda]

"我的名字是始源," he says in his heavily accented Mandarin, and Zhoumi learns why everyone is just a little bit in love with Choi Siwon.

omfg lol D: ♥

when Zhoumi brings by apples imported from Canada (because he can't find a moose, and their manager has explained very succinctly that Henry's not allowed to have beer yet), he hears a loud sniffle, and then running water.

Henry answers the door with red eyes and bits of tissue sticking to his cheeks. "Apples?"

"They're Canadian," Zhoumi says lamely.

"Oh," Henry says, a little brokenly. "Do you want to come in?"

C-Canadian apples ;_____; Mooooose ;_______; Underaged drinkingggg ;________; ♥♥♥

"I think Key probably has something to eat in his bag."

I. I see SHINee. I think I'll love you forever. Srsly.

"对对."

DIES. ♥

[shieldkitten]

Ahahahahaha You got some of my favourite parts in this. I COULDN'T NOT PUT SHINEE IN. I justify it as... I needed trainees, and why make people up when you can use real ones? ^^

[xxivysaurus]

i love you?

[hoyah]

i'm not even halfway through. and i'm going to cry. ;-; seriously. how do you manage to capture just the right amount of emotion? i feel so excited along with your zhou mi

also, lee sooman would probably be called sajangnim. because sunbae just means senior, but sajang is closer to boss

*dies* oh god. i love what you wrote. that elf only13 thing, directed at zhou mi and henry. it was wonderful, in its irony. i love it. love love love it.

[shieldkitten]

Oooh thank you! This is why I am SO BAD AT KOREAN. I would just call him 'yo, boss man!' and get kicked out of SM.

I was injecting as much bitter irony into the only13 rant as I could. IDK, most of it was pretty much from actual rants. I actually translated one back when I was still insane!Only13 (before I realised I could be both Only13 and 7SJM) here, and a lot of the rant was from that, as well as from one popular one that kept getting reposted on Soompi detailing reasons why Henry couldn't join Super Junior.

I re-read the bit I wrote after my translation and I'm actually kind of proud of myself for not saying anything hateful, though, wow, melodramatic much, self?

[hoyah]

btw. i adore your lsm. 8D

>>; yeah, see that rant, it was realy familiar to me. and i think it struck a chord. because i just... i've been reading those rants from day one, and i've never understood them. the whole "They don't know what they went through" argument is so ridiculous to me. not anyone in sj is going to completely understand anyone else in sj... and it's presumptuous to assume you know better than they do what they're going through.