Fic: Segments (Sheppard/Lorne, PG-13)

[sheryden]

Title: Segments
Author: sheryden
Fandoms: Stargate: Atlantis
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John Sheppard/Evan Lorne
Spoilers: Minor for "The Ark" (as the story starts at the end of that episode)
Word Count: 3332
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: They don't belong to me, which is quite sad, really.
Summary: John Sheppard and Evan Lorne struggle with being military

Comments

[apinkpanthress]

I loved this! :) Have to memorise it.
And I find the part so cute, where John comes in and says "I miss you."...so sweet!

Oh and please don't get mad, but I think I found an error at the end.
“I won’t let anything happen to you,” Sheppard said. He started to need Evan’s muscle with his fingers. “We’ll figure it out.”
I think it is knead instead of need, right?

[j_r_hartley]

Awww!

A little less angsty than I usually read, but we all need a bit of romance and gooey-ness every once in a while. Also, I love how you regularly use ‘Evan’ … people tend to forget the lovely Major has a first name, we know better! :D

[j_r_hartley]

Oh, and I love your Eliot banner! XD