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FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5a - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous April 30 2011, 06:03:43 UTC
A/N - Well, I thought they’d finished. But they soon let me know they hadn’t. I think by this stage the OP will have disowned any knowledge of having prompted this fic because this part just got further from their request by the minute. My apologies for that, it wouldn’t let me alone. Please heed the warning. If this comes through twice, or even multiple times, my apologies. I still suck at posting ( ... )

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5b - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous April 30 2011, 06:07:57 UTC
“So you’re trying to get rid of me, is that it?” he asked. “You’d rather watch the football by yourself ( ... )

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5c - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous April 30 2011, 06:11:49 UTC
Sherlock would watch his face for a long time, waiting for the signals John was giving off, that unconscious desire which was so alluring, before pulling him closer. John would let Sherlock turn his body around, slide his clothing down to expose his buttocks, and apply enough lubricant to them both to ensure a smooth passage. Enough, but not too much. He would always ask if John was ready, John would always reply in the positive. Sherlock would indicate that John was to sit. John would let himself be guided to lean back against Sherlock’s body and Sherlock would manoeuvre them both until John was impaled on his cock, relishing the small cry of pleasure from John and the tight grip of his passage. And then John would watch telly while Sherlock worked ( ... )

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5d - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous April 30 2011, 06:16:11 UTC
“Can you lift up a little?” he asked ( ... )

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5e - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous April 30 2011, 06:20:51 UTC
He stood on tiptoe for another kiss and kept on kissing that sweet mouth, amazed at the taste and the heat. Sherlock’s hands were on his arse now, feeling the ridge where the waistband of his trousers had left red marks. Well, that was embarrassing. When they broke apart a thin strand of saliva still led from his lips to Sherlock’s, before it broke and he felt it land on his chin ( ... )

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous April 30 2011, 06:25:30 UTC
He separated himself from John and lay down on top of him, stroking him, kissing the bags under his eyes, the deep line between his brows. And then it got better when John opened his eyes and smiled ( ... )

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous April 30 2011, 19:28:31 UTC
Nice! I love the little awkwardness of it. The constant negotiations. It all works out in the end, as odd as the arrangement is.

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous May 1 2011, 05:56:00 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to comment, I'm glad you think it works, I didn't know what anyone would make of it.

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous May 1 2011, 12:05:11 UTC
Oh, there's more! Great addition!

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous May 1 2011, 23:12:28 UTC
Thank you, it's very kind of you to say so.

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous May 25 2011, 03:55:44 UTC
Okay I am totally horrified to see how few gushing comments have been left for this fic.
On that note:
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG.
This may be the single hottest thing I've ever read.
I love your porn and your characterizations and how sweet it is at the end and sdkjfhsdjfhskdjhfskdjhfskdjfh.

Do you have other fics??

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous May 25 2011, 18:38:27 UTC
Author!anon here. Thank you for your kind comments, I'm blushing. I write S/J pretty much non-stop allowing for writer's block and a lack of new episodes to inspire me, but have never posted any of my other S/J fics anywhere. And that's a long story in itself. If I ever do I'll give an indication as to where they are. Thank you again.

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous May 25 2011, 04:29:34 UTC
Guh! Very sexy - loved it!

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous May 25 2011, 18:39:59 UTC
Thank you, that's very kind of you to say so.

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous July 24 2011, 15:01:41 UTC
I love how perfectly Sherlock is in character, yet still so loving and caring towards John.

Hot sexy fluff - amazing!

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Re: FILL: Giving & Taking Pt 5f - END - NC-17 for adult situation. anonymous August 12 2011, 16:46:09 UTC
That's just what I was aiming for, hot sexy fluff. Glad to hear it worked for you. Thank you for your kind comments.

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