Positive Dirty Talk
anonymous
October 10 2010, 17:50:30 UTC
Sherlock's had lovers who enjoyed talking dirty, calling him a whore and slut and other nasty, sexy things. Except Sherlock didn't think they were sexy, but thought that was normal, so didn't know how to tell his partners he didn't like it.
One night, John starts that, but HE notices how Sherlock flinches and closes off a bit. After that, all dirty talk in 221B Baker Street is pure compliment.
Well, unless Mrs. Hudson... but do we really WANT to know about that?
Filled - Part 1/?
anonymous
October 13 2010, 16:09:02 UTC
The first time it happened had been earlier that morning. They had been leaving a crime scene and something (unusually for him, Sherlock still couldn’t put his finger on what exactly it had been)… some tilt of the head, or flicker of tongue against lip, or a certain look… had made Sherlock drag John into a derelict, deserted warehouse and kiss him. He thought he could always say it was data collection of human reactions to specific situations if his reading of John had been wrong
( ... )
Filled - Part 2/5
anonymous
October 13 2010, 17:10:50 UTC
John had raised himself on one elbow and grinned breathlessly at him and now, a few minutes later, Sherlock’s legs were over John’s shoulders as John pushed gently but firmly into him. Sherlock let his eyes drift shut as he felt his body opening, accommodating John’s insistent press. He had always loved this, almost since the first time he had tried it, and from time to time had wondered if it was entirely normal to get such pleasure out of it. Correction, he told himself, as John gasped for breath and held Sherlock perfectly still with a warning hand on his hip, Sebastian wondered if it was entirely normal. Sherlock had never been overly worried about what was considered normal or what people thought but Sebastian, who was still uncomfortable with his bisexuality and what people might mutter about him behind his back, had fretted endlessly about their activities in bed and their respective roles.
You’d think he would have been happy about it, he mused. That way he got to avoid any threatening self-analysis over his masculinity.When
( ... )
Filled - part 3/5
anonymous
October 13 2010, 17:13:01 UTC
Sherlock’s eyes flicked open to see John staring down at him, looking faintly concerned. ‘Of course,’ he answered automatically. ‘Why?’
‘Well, it’s just that you’re…’ John’s voice tailed off and he managed, with surprising dexterity considering he was bracing himself against the mattress, to indicate Sherlock’s sudden lack of response to John’s thrusts, and the distant expression that indicated that Sherlock had been far away inside his own head.
‘I’m fine. Come on,’ Sherlock tugged pointedly at John’s hips, but John refused to move.
‘You don’t like me talking?’ he asked.
‘Don’t be silly, of course I don’t mind you talking,’ Sherlock said truthfully. It’s what you’re saying - those words I can see hovering just behind your lips - that’s the problem.As if he couldn’t help himself, John rocked into Sherlock again and moaned
( ... )
Filled - Part 4/5
anonymous
October 13 2010, 17:15:25 UTC
Understatement, the still-functioning part of his brain whispered to him. You almost always are. It was true. Thanks to an occasion when Sherlock made a bit too much noise during a particularly mind-blowing orgasm and Sebastian had had to put up with three days’ teasing from his neighbour about wanking too loudly, Sebastian had developed the annoying habit of clamping a hand firmly over Sherlock’s mouth right before he came, despite Sherlock’s promise to be more discreet and his newly-adopted habit of biting down on his hand or his lip at the crucial moment. One of the (many) reasons why Sherlock hadn’t been too disappointed when that relationship finished.
‘Good,’ growled John. ‘You’re so fucking hot… I want to hear you, do you understand? Not in a warehouse now…doesn’t matter who hears…’
This was so unlike John that Sherlock gasped, ‘Mrs-’
‘Mrs. Hudson was married,’ John grunted, grinding his hips in a deliberate circle that made Sherlock’s fingers dig into John’s hips and an embarrassingly desperate noise struggle out of his
( ... )
Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
October 13 2010, 17:16:46 UTC
After a small eternity, John opened his eyes, looking dazed, and groaned, ‘Bloody hell.’
Slightly ungracefully, he eased himself free, disposed of the condom and collapsed next to Sherlock, panting for breath. ‘Christ, that was amazing. Is it always like that with you?’
Sherlock, struggling not to succumb to the post-orgasmic lethargy that was weighing down his limbs, murmured, ‘No. No, not usually.’
‘Well Jesus.’ John turned onto his side and flung an arm across Sherlock casually, companionably, as though it were the most natural thing in the world. ‘That was unbelievable. You’re unbelievable.’
Giving in to the gentle pressure of John’s arm around his waist, Sherlock turned onto his side, curious about what John wanted now. As it turned out, John only wanted to card his fingers through the damp hair at the nape of Sherlock’s neck and murmur, ‘You know that your past boyfriends were lunatics, don’t you? I can’t believe they let you go; God, what utter freaks.’
The motion of John’s fingers was soothing, and hearing John defending
( ... )
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
October 14 2010, 00:47:18 UTC
OP:
Grab a seat; this is going to be long.
I'll try to list everything I LOVED about this fic.
1. Both of them are well aware and totally comfortable with their sexualities. I always love that, and it's far more believable in this day and age than being totally surprised by attraction to the same sex.
2. I was actually expecting the fill to have John start out calling Sherlock all those nasty things at first, then switching gears when he found out it wasn't welcome. Your idea was SO MUCH BETTER, and more in character, I think. John's too sweet to be mean.
3. I’d have moved into a bloody broom cupboard if you’d wanted it.
What a thing to say in bed! *fans self* That shouldn't have been as hot as it was.
4. Sherlock getting surprised and shy to be so completely praised during sex. Them exes did a number on him. *growl*
5. Surprise hair-pets and cuddles! Really showed now no one's taken care of Sherlock in the past. :( No worries now, though.
6. And he would tell John so. But… not right now.Yeah, just go ahead and marinate in
( ... )
Author!Anon saying thank you kindly!
anonymous
October 14 2010, 17:34:28 UTC
*gasp* Wheee! I always wanted a puppy! And look at his little jumper! Thank you!
I'm so pleased you liked it, especially since it didn't quite fit the original prompt in that John didn't start using those terms to Sherlock. Try as I might, I just couldn't hear it in my mind & so it ended up being a bit different.
But I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the praise *blushes*
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
June 27 2012, 19:51:34 UTC
Agreeing with this so much! I rarely like reading JohnLock fics, no one ever seems to get it right. It's usually just awkward smut for the sake of smut. But this? This has FEELS and attraction, and things that make it SO AMAZING. Well written!
Saw it floating about Tumblr and it definitely deserved the rec it had!
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
October 17 2010, 23:42:51 UTC
Someone rec'd this over on the bbcshelock comm and GUH. I second everything the OP said and thank you for making my lunch break much more enjoyable. Perhaps too enjoyable, dammit. XD
One night, John starts that, but HE notices how Sherlock flinches and closes off a bit. After that, all dirty talk in 221B Baker Street is pure compliment.
Well, unless Mrs. Hudson... but do we really WANT to know about that?
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You’d think he would have been happy about it, he mused. That way he got to avoid any threatening self-analysis over his masculinity.When ( ... )
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‘Well, it’s just that you’re…’ John’s voice tailed off and he managed, with surprising dexterity considering he was bracing himself against the mattress, to indicate Sherlock’s sudden lack of response to John’s thrusts, and the distant expression that indicated that Sherlock had been far away inside his own head.
‘I’m fine. Come on,’ Sherlock tugged pointedly at John’s hips, but John refused to move.
‘You don’t like me talking?’ he asked.
‘Don’t be silly, of course I don’t mind you talking,’ Sherlock said truthfully. It’s what you’re saying - those words I can see hovering just behind your lips - that’s the problem.As if he couldn’t help himself, John rocked into Sherlock again and moaned ( ... )
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‘Good,’ growled John. ‘You’re so fucking hot… I want to hear you, do you understand? Not in a warehouse now…doesn’t matter who hears…’
This was so unlike John that Sherlock gasped, ‘Mrs-’
‘Mrs. Hudson was married,’ John grunted, grinding his hips in a deliberate circle that made Sherlock’s fingers dig into John’s hips and an embarrassingly desperate noise struggle out of his ( ... )
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Slightly ungracefully, he eased himself free, disposed of the condom and collapsed next to Sherlock, panting for breath. ‘Christ, that was amazing. Is it always like that with you?’
Sherlock, struggling not to succumb to the post-orgasmic lethargy that was weighing down his limbs, murmured, ‘No. No, not usually.’
‘Well Jesus.’ John turned onto his side and flung an arm across Sherlock casually, companionably, as though it were the most natural thing in the world. ‘That was unbelievable. You’re unbelievable.’
Giving in to the gentle pressure of John’s arm around his waist, Sherlock turned onto his side, curious about what John wanted now. As it turned out, John only wanted to card his fingers through the damp hair at the nape of Sherlock’s neck and murmur, ‘You know that your past boyfriends were lunatics, don’t you? I can’t believe they let you go; God, what utter freaks.’
The motion of John’s fingers was soothing, and hearing John defending ( ... )
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I think I love you haha!
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Grab a seat; this is going to be long.
I'll try to list everything I LOVED about this fic.
1. Both of them are well aware and totally comfortable with their sexualities. I always love that, and it's far more believable in this day and age than being totally surprised by attraction to the same sex.
2. I was actually expecting the fill to have John start out calling Sherlock all those nasty things at first, then switching gears when he found out it wasn't welcome. Your idea was SO MUCH BETTER, and more in character, I think. John's too sweet to be mean.
3. I’d have moved into a bloody broom cupboard if you’d wanted it.
What a thing to say in bed! *fans self* That shouldn't have been as hot as it was.
4. Sherlock getting surprised and shy to be so completely praised during sex. Them exes did a number on him. *growl*
5. Surprise hair-pets and cuddles! Really showed now no one's taken care of Sherlock in the past. :( No worries now, though.
6. And he would tell John so. But… not right now.Yeah, just go ahead and marinate in ( ... )
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I'm so pleased you liked it, especially since it didn't quite fit the original prompt in that John didn't start using those terms to Sherlock. Try as I might, I just couldn't hear it in my mind & so it ended up being a bit different.
But I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the praise *blushes*
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Saw it floating about Tumblr and it definitely deserved the rec it had!
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